Concealed

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Hey guys this is my brand new story! It's kind of based on the book Fallen by Lauren Kate. I know I'm new and everything but please vote and comment and fan! would mean soo much to me =)

So here goes :

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Prologue

"Oh my god!" Macey squealed excitedly, "look who's coming your way."

I looked at her oddly then turned around, and silently gasped. My heart fell to my stomach, as nausea washed over me. I felt dizzy just looking at him, my eyes couldn't adjust to the beauty radiating from him. 

Noah Walker. The most beautiful guy on the planet, possibly, was walking towards me, looking like a prince in his tuxedo with his chestnut brown hair combed backwards revealing his shiny blue eyes, and amazing features. His tuxedo higlighted his abs and his muscular body, which made me swoon like every other girl in the school. Only, I had more talent in hiding my absolute admiration. If I found any guy who was 0.1 times more beautiful than Noah, I would know immediately that he was inhumane.

He walked over to me, I heart beating like a drum, I was glad for the music that was bursting through the loud speakers in the heavenly gardens of our school. See, it was our prom, and it was so hot inside, obviously due to Noah, that everbody decided to take the party outside. His eyes were fixed onto me, and I was squirming in delight as he stopped opposite me.

"Hey," he said, simply. I forced the blood to stay where it was and not travel to my cheeks.

"Hi," I calmly replied, although I was doing a happy dance inside.

"Can you err-" he began, and adorably scratched the back of his head, "come for a walk with me."

My lips curved into a smile and I nodded, "sure."

I could make out Macey squealing in the background but my eyes were fixed onto Noah's. His gorgeousness was making me freeze. He held out his hand, which I slipped mine into and he led me away from the party.

"Where are we going?" I asked.

He chucked, "I've been meaning to show you this place, it's awesome and romantic," he glanced at me as he said romantic, slowly and steadily. I blushed and laughed.

"I bet it is."

It was only a five minutes walk, when Noah stopped and I gasped.

Huge beautiful trees were planted in a huge circle, with two trees set with a gap which I assumed was the entrance and inside the space was another circle, only smaller, made out of more exotic trees all closing in together to form a towery thing. Roses, sunflowers, petunias and all kinds of gorgeous flowers were planting around the trees and in between two trees was a small entrance.

It was awesome and something you'd expect to see in a fairy tale. Like a tower made of wood protected by another circle of trees. Something totally unexplainable yet simple.

"You like it?" Noah smirked.

I looked at him and nodded eagerly, and he chuckled. He led me in through the gap in between the trees into the circle of wood and we entered the other entrance into the smaller circle. Inside that circle was a small bench. Noah sat down and pulled me onto the bench with him.

"I've wanted to ask you this for a long time, but will you Eva Rosaline Araquel be my girlfriend?" He asked. I froze, not expecting his request to be so sudden. My heart melted at the sight of his breathtaking smile.

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