New {A Divergent story}

two

TRIS

"Good morning miss Leader" Tori teases. That is it all its been for the past two days, jokes and more jokes. She was glad, that Tobias and I were appointed the position, but naturally Tori being Tori she had to make some jokes, it's part of her.

"Yeah, yeah good morning to you too" I laughed along, placing my phone and keys behind the counter.

"Also, happy two week anniversary" she grinned, scrunching up her nose.

"Thanks" I laughed again, I've been doing a lot of laughing today and its barely 9:43.

The two weeks really flied by, it honestly felt like the wedding was just the day before. Except for the fact that it wasn't actually the day before, but actually thirteen days before and-- I'm rambling, in my head. Good job.

"Hey do you wanna have lunch with me and Bud today?" she asked piling up old receipts. Business had been going slow for the last few days, only about ten customers between the three of us. We spent our days, wiping counters and organizing the supply closet for probably the ten thousandth time, if we weren't doing that we were playing cards. To say the least, I have gotten a lot better since Marlene showed me how to play. Marlene... I didn't see her much after the wedding, although I know that she and Shauna are spending a significant amount of time together talking about Uriah and Zeke no doubt. Although they are great guys, they definitely have their faults; but a perfect Uriah would always consist of a corny joke or two and some cheesy pick up lines. Zeke was basically an older version of Uriah (or maybe Uriah was a younger version of Zeke?) so he had everything Uriah had but was a little more mature about it. Zeke also asked Shauna to marry him a few nights after the wedding. Tobias told the whole story from what Zeke said, but I also got Shauna's side, from well Shauna. To sum them both up, Zeke; was smooth and totally cool about it, saying 'Hey Shaun, why don't you have a ring on that finger?' Shauna of course replying with ' cause that where an engagement ring goes Z' then Zeke said ' well it just so happens that I have this ring in my pocket, just the right size' before anyone knew what was going Shauna laughed, and hopped into Zeke's arms muttering yes against the skin of his neck.

I of course was hanging out with Christina so I hadn't seen it. Oh Christina, she and Wes are together. They were a cute couple, Wes a couple of inches taller than Chris. They're always talking, or holding hands the typical can't keep-their-hands-off-each-other couple. But with Chris it seemed natural in some weird way, that would only work out for Christina. I told her about my new job over a text receiving "WHOO HOO YOU DESERVE IT ! :D" I met with her later to celebrate.

"Hey Tris, so yes or no?" Tori asks again, obviously confused by my sudden silence.

"Oh sure. That'd be awesome" I smiled up at her, receiving one in return.

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UPDATE: i WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE THIS STORY ALTHOUGH IT WON'T BE A LONG STORY. 

THANK YOU

Guys I honestly think this was a mistake.

I thought if enough of you guys told me you wanted a sequel I would get ideas, but I honestly just feel so uninspired to do this. I'm sorry for letting any of you guys down, but I don't think I'll continue to write this story, I honestly don't see the plot going anywhere without it being something like every other DNW sequel. I just don't have ideas for this story or plot. I'm honestly really sorry, sincerely I am but it just isn't working. I don't want to have a semi decent first book then ruin it with a horrible sequel.

But don't be too alarmed, I'm still writing and I have a several more Divergent stories in mind, including an After Allegiant type story,  and some short stories.

I'm truly sorry

Marie Rivers