UNEXPECTED LOVE

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Hello everyone..
I would be really greatfull if you have planed on reading my story coz this is my first story. when it comes to first story we face many difficulties in spellings, grammar, and so i would be happy if you guys could point them out to me, maybe not by comments. just tell me through private messages if it isn't a burden to you.
I would like to tell you that i dont want anyone to steal pices from my story in any form... coz i'm doing this with my own ideas and imagination...

Susan is an 17 year old who lives with her brother and grandparent while she belongs to a rich family due to their sucessful parent in the business field and their family state
She is from a  particular village of a mistryous land. And is a girl with short brown and straight silky hair, with brown eyes and a beautiful face.....
know what??? her parents think its just the wealth, luxury,comfort and providing whatever she asks is what that brings happiness for her life but they just didn't know the fact that they forgot the on word "LOVE" that united their family once before a long time. so this is how the lost past comes back to reality, what Susan wished to get every night and day with more love to her life not only from her family but also from her sole-mate.... 

Yeah .... life is unfair nd also fair at times...

For susan life was unfair at first but later life became fair for her with so much of love that she never expected to get...

So this is the introduction to my book....
Plz coperate with me to make it a sucessful story
Coz this is my first story...

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Love u all..

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