Illegal My Ass (story review)

"I've never laugh this much in my entire life just by reading.."

"And i never read a book that is raining with sarcasm.."

I just can't believe how much laughter I can get just by reading this amazing story by @makeandoffer. I know this story is classified as Restricted but what can I say I didn't expect to laugh this much...

Usually when I read stories I put my self to the lead character.. Coz I want to feel what she feels, think the way she is thinking.. So I can understand her fully.. I want to be in her shoes.. I want to feel what the writer wants to express.. That's why I have high respects to writers who put intensities in their stories.. So much emotions for some fictional characters and events..

Except for the unbelievable humor this story has, there are also parts here that makes me sad or pissed, sometimes also angry or kinda H.O.T. (know what I mean..) There is one chapter here that also makes me cry.. I call it the "confrontation" You'll know it when you get to that part why I called it that way...

I really like the story plot... Even though its kinda liberated for some readers (like me) but for some it might think its too much because of the happenings and stuff that a 16 years old teen mustn't do or must do maybe, just maybe they might be offended.. Especially that scene where the writer include "asian hookers" or something along that line.. I am a proud Filipina and an Asian but definitely not a hooker.. At first I get offended but what can I do its her story, her plot, her words and her way of thinking.. When I think about it, I'm kinda sad coz maybe that's what the writer seem what asian women's are.. I don't think she's a racist, she's a damn f*ing good writer... Because I enjoy it... Maybe she might attached a apology or something at the end of that chapter as an authors note that she didn't meant it seriously.. she might encounter readers not as open minded as some of us Asians who already read this story and get a report or something like that...

BUT WHO CARES!!!! It's in the understanding of the reader.. ME,, I don't care coz I think its a reality to someone.. I love intense emotions.. And that's what I'm getting in this story..

The story characters are super cool.. 

> MIA I want to be like her.. her carefree attitude.. Live ur life to the fullest.. Drink alcohol likes there's no tomorrow.. hahaha!!! so much for teen stuff for me... :)

> DRAKE The mistery man.. So much mistery for himself..

> NATE I want him for a brother, literally!!!! Where can I order one like him?? hahaha!!! honestly I just love him... I want that kind of relationship if I had a brother..

> LACEY A perfect bff.. I also want her..

Even though its Mia and Drake story I also include Nate and Lacey coz I think this story won't work without them..

One more thing I never read a book that I can make a coffee table book for the sarcasm this story had... I promise you new readers you'll be entertained very much... The bantering is very comical.. Come to think of that maybe I can use some of the Sarcasm in real life especially the dora sarcasm... lols...

"THIS STORY IS EPIC!!!! TWO THUMBS UP!!!!"

FOR THOSE PEEPS WHO'LL READ THIS BEFORE THE ACTUAL STORY ITS RATED R,, IT MEANS ITS RESTRICTED, FOR 18+ ONLY.. MATURE AUDIENCE.. IT HAS SEX, DRUGS, KILLINGS AND FOUL LANGUAGES NOT SUITABLE FOR YOUNG READERS..

@makeandoffer is a great writer lets support her by following, reading, voting, commenting on her amazing stories.. My second fav story she wrote is "The Shy Girl has a Gun" and she has a lot more...

And plsss follow me also @la_fabulosa03 u can see my selections of reading list, my other story reviews.. Plss don't forget to fan coz I follow back.. and to vote for my reviews.. and leave a comment so I can have ur name being shouted out on my authors note chapter..

THANK YOU SO MUCH IN ADVANCE!!!!

@la_fabulosa03

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