OK IM SO SORRY. IT'S VERY CONFUSING AND I CAN ONLY MAKE IT BETTER IF YOU GUYS CRITICISE THE WRITING. DO YOU GUYS LIKE IT? DO YOU GUYS THINK I WENT IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION? DO YOU THINK I SHOULD HAVE PUT THE KID IN THE MIX? I NEED HELP
Andrew's P.O.V
Last night was so fun. We went to a club and danced the night away. We had drinks and later on we went back to the awesome manor.
"Hey someone go check on Natalia."Felix said. I went up the stairs with Felicity in front of me. We opened her door slowly just in case she was asleep. We opened it up, no noise. We opened it more to find her facing the door. The blankets were at her waist exposing her torso which was naked all besides her bra. Her bra was black lace almost see through. They were big.
Her face was so peaceful and calm. It was a beautiful sight, but all that ended when I saw Jason behind her. His arm around her waist. I wanted to break his arm, let' see how he would do then.
"Oops, we should go."Felicity said backing out of the room closing the door.
"She is so nice and cute. I'm scared to get on her bad side."She smiled walking down the stairs.
"How was she?"Felix asked sitting next to Mina.
"She's doing fine, oh and Jason's doing fine too."I said.
"What does that mean?"He asked.
"Nothing it just means your sister is half naked in bed with Jason."I said. He got up with anger.
"Hey sit down!"Mina ordered. He looked down at her but something about her makes you want to listen.
"She's almost eighteen. She's responsible and she understands a lot. Leave her be. It's not like they were doing anything."She said. He wasn't convinced but he wasn't about to go up there and wake her up.
"She's still my sister. I know I haven't been there, but it's my time to be there for her. He's taking her away from me."Felix said. He never shows emotion like that.
"Dude everything will be ok. We could always threaten him."I smiled at the thought.
"You got that right."We high-fived.
"Boys." The two girls whispered.
"Let's get some sleep."I said waggling my eyebrows at Felicity. She laughed.
"No. I'm going to shut my eyes and dream. I'm not doing the kind of sleep your thinking of."She said. We got up and walked to the bedroom beside Natalia's.
The night continued when we laid in bed.
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What The Hell Did I Do?
Teen FictionNeela grows up with a rough start, and thinks she falls in love. In this story she goes through pain, suffering & loss but also gains a lot more. She's a mobster, quits, goes into the army, then she comes back home to find a new life.
