Things Fall Apart

Chapter 1; Perfect Life

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Chapter 1; Perfect Life

*Rachel's P.O.V.*

"Hey guys, How are you?" I asked."Great, we couldn't be better." Amy and Nicole said at the same time. "Do you wanna go dress shopping after school?" asked Amy. "I'd love to!" I said. "Has Logan even asked you to prom yet Rache?" Amy asked. "No, and prom is less than two weeks away, what if he is gonna take someone else." I said sadly. "Maybe he's just waiting for the right time, you guys have been together for over three years, you both love each other, he just wants it to be special." Nicole insisted. "I really hope so, and yes I do love him more than anything." I said proudly. "Hey guys, I gotta go I'll see you guys at lunch love y'all." I said.

Amy has been my best friend forever, we grew up together, she has brunette hair, hazel eyes, perfect smile she was an amazing person, with a big personality. Now, Nicole she was my best friend but, we did have our arguments, Amy has been their more for me than Nicole has, she's back stabbed me many times. Nicole has dark curly brown hair, perfect tan, brown eyes, the guys basically drooled over her, it was gross.

I start walking towards my locker, thinking about Logan, and wondering if maybe he did want to take someone else to prom. I started to get upset just thinking about it. I really love him like Amy said he's my whole world, and I love him more than anything. He truly makes me happy, the happiest I could ever really be.

As i got to my locker, Logan came up behind me and scared me, "BOOOOOOOOOO." Logan yelled. I jumped so high up in the air I could touch the ceiling. "Hey babe, I missed you." I said excited. He leaned in and kissed me on the cheek and said, "I missed you too beautiful." He asked me to come with him, so I said sure babe, it was close to lunch anyways so I can leave.  He grabbed my hand and guided me out to his car, he blindfolded me when we got to the car, and told me he loved me.

We finally arrived at our final destination, he came and opened up my door, he grabbed my hand and guided me out. He walked me inside some doors. He took off my blindfold, he told me to turn around, I turned around and realized he had taken me to where we had first met, which was also our first date. It was the cutest prom ask out ever!!!!!! I was sooo happy, I kept thinking I was dreaming, but it was real, he said baby what is your answer, and I said yes, yes ,yes, yes!!!!!!! He grabbed me and picked me up and kissed me. He asked me, "Babe tonight do you wanna come over since it's a Friday?" Logan questioned. "Sure babe I wouldn't miss it for the world, I'll be at your house around eight, I'm going dress shopping with Amy and Nicole." I explained. "Rache no matter what dress you wear you will always be beautiful." He assured. "Thanks baby your the sweetest, I'll see you around eight." I reminded him.

I walked into school, and ran into the lunch room, the second I spotted Amy and Nicole I quickly darted towards them. "GUYS GUYS OMG GUESS WHAT?!?!" I screamed. "What?" they both said in unison. "Logan asked me to prom, and it was the cutest ask ever!" I squealed. "I'm so happy for you, see I told you he was just waiting for the right time." Amy said. Nicole gave me an evil type of look, and left the table all mad. "I wonder what that was about?" I questioned. "With Nicole anything is possible, ignore her Rache, this is about you not her," Amy said. "Thanks Ams your the best." I assured.

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xoxo Elizabeth