in a coma (a love story)

chapter one : the note

I have known Angelique ever since we met back in 7th grade its funny how I met her actually .
i really liked her so i picked on her I still remember how she looked she had long blackish brownish hair in a very long french braid , her eyes were grayish blue with a hint of black .they were just beautiful but of course i never told her that .
anyway I first saw her when Mrs.Mott (our teacher ) asked her to come up and introduce herself Mrs.Mott was going through the entire class to come up and say a little about ourselves its kinda dumb in my opinnon if you ask me but sadly she called me up
"next is Mr. Jack Bailey i sighed as i pulled my self up to go to the front of the class . ''So Mr.Bailey tell us about yourself ".
Umm hi everybody Im Jack and umm I like bands , video games and movies I like to draw tons of things but don't ask me to draw you anything and that's me hope ya like me , then very annoyingly i went back to my desk as the boys next to me were taunting me
" um hi im ahhh jack and umm" one said in a dumb founded voice people have always made fun of me ever since 5th grade because of GOD knows how many reasons its been mostly my apperance i had short-medium length hair I was 6'1 , wore mostly black , Grey and dark red clothing ranging from band tees to flannel to just plain clothing with no logo on it
my eyes were green and i had a nose and lip ring
because of this people would call me names like emo, goth and it would get worse they would call me faggot or just simply fag but it never bothered  me too much .

"okay next to introuduce themselves is misses Angelique Winchester "
the whole class eargerly looks around to see who Angeligue was
to their surprise
(and mine ) rose this amazingly beautiful creature she shyly walks to the front of the class and in a sweet voice says
"hi im Angelique Im 13 years old i love bands ..my most favorite band is black veil brides and i like drawing , I like musicals stupid i know but my favorite is phantom of the opera and that's it hope we can get along " .
and just like that i was smitten she then goes back to her seat and begins to look at me (pfft how do i know i was looking at her too ) our eyes met and something just went through me I cant explain it even to this day she just kept looking until she gave me a confused yet very pretty smile and looks up at Mrs.Mott again , I gave her a smirk in return and proceeded to write in my note book hi - jack and tore it and folded it and passed it to guy behind me then passed it to Angelique i saw as she opened it up quietly and grabbed a pen from her back pack and started to scrible in it i quickly turned back to the front before she could see me then i felt a tap on my shoulder its the guy with the note i again grabbed it quickly before getting caught i opened it under my desk and it read " hi jack :3 " i smiled and apparently Mrs.Mott saw my smile
"something humorous Mr . bailey "
it startled me the whole class (including Angelique ) laughed
n...no Mrs.Mott i said with a stutter she then goes back to talking then another tap on my shoulder another note i opened it up
" that was very..interesting haha you seem nice "
i scribbled thanks you too wanna hang out after class
i passed it back got tapped on the shoulder
" if you have lunch after this then yeah sure :) "'
i looked back at her and nodded she smiled .
TO BE CONTINUED ......