Hey guys, this story is not edited at all and not finshed either. Started writing it in 2011, haven't touched it since then haha.
You can leave comments on what I need to fix and how I can make the story better.
Criticize if you want. I dont mind.
Let me know if the main story line is ok.
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Chapter 1
The wind rushing by me, my hair flowinng behind me, the trees whipped past, my heart pumping fast.
This is how my life has been goin for the past weeks.
I snapped out of my thoughts and looked to see my dad running right beside me. The thought of why we have been running tried to enter but I pushed it back down deep at the very back of my head. I ddnt have the time or energy to be thinking about that right now.
"keep running Cali." my dad reminded me noticing that I was slowing down.
I could hear his heavy breathing. I don't know what I would do if I lost him, I would be lost in this w--I snapped out of my thoughts.
I felt my dad nudged me on the side of my ribs to remind me to keep going.
I finally saw a clearing throught the trees. As we approched I saw a road so me and my dad had to stay on the more hidden side of the road and what a bonus it was for us, there was a old run down convinience store accross the road. Those types usually don't ask for any personal info.
It's time to change our apperance so tht hopefully nobody could recognize us.
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