Changing a thug

Beep Beep Beep !!!! UGH I swear I wish I never gotten that alarm clock. "D BREAKFAST IS READY ! " my mom yelled. I swear she yells for no reason but always telling me about inside voices. Well I guess you guys are probably wondering who the hell is this chick, well my name is Dana I am 5 feet tall (5'3 with heels ) I live in the suburbs of Atlanta hmmmm let's see....... my hair is a light brown wih a hint of blonde, reaches the middle of my back and y'all already know I gotta a body that makes everyone turn their heads when I come through oh and I'm yellow bone and proud to be one ! Some might say I'm conceded but I call it loving myself. WHEW back to reality, today is the last day of school and I am hype to get my summer started. As I look through my closet trying to find the perfect outfit to fit my mood for the day I come across some high waisted dark blue levi shorts, a hot pink half shirt with in gold says SEXY that shows off my belly button that I got pierced last week and some gold sandals I'll handle my jewlery later. I hop in the shower for about 30 minutes and get dressed, then I go to put on my makeup which isn't much because I have natural beauty. "MOM !" I yelled as I walked down the stairs. "WHAT THE HELL DID I TELL YOU ABOUT USING YOUR INSIDE VOICE !" she yelled back. "sorry." I whispered. What I tell y'all this woman crazy. " Ma I'm staying at Ambers tonight and her mom already said its okay." I said while shoving some bacon in my mouth. "Dana don't talk with your mouth full and okay don't do anything I wouldn't do and have fun." she said while getting ready to go to work. "You know I will, bye mom love you !" I say will running up that stairs to grab my phone and purse. "LOVE YOU TOO !" she yells while getting in her car. I get in my all black charger and head off to this hell hole i call a school. I pull into my usual parking space and wait for my ride or die Amber to pull and right on time she pulls up in her all white charger. So let me tell you about my girl Amber. Well she's about 5'2 she is a milk chocolate and body that will blow anybodies mind . Me and this girl all the way back to our diaper days, her dad and my dad were pretty close being that my dad was the biggest drug lord in the south and her father being his partner. Her father and my father have been locked up for some time over a huge drug bust and I know what y'all thinking "What happened to all their money?" Well of course we stillll have plenty of money we just don't flaunt it around like some. I got knocked out of my thoughts by somebody knocking on my window "I know you hot as hell sitting in this car with all the windows rolled up in 105 degress weather!" she yelled while I opened the door. "Shutup and come on so I can get this day over with." I said as we walked towards the front doors of our beloved racheet ass Jamerson High we may not live in the ghetto but this school was as ghetto as they come. "Are you ready for Ashleys party tonight?" she asked as we walked torwards our lockers. "When am I not ready!" I laughed as I got the rest of my things out of my locker. I turn around to see Amber in a trance starring off towards a group of boys I swear this girl is something else when it come to a nigga "AMBER!" I yelled as I tryed to get her attention. "Girl I would love to slap skins with that ." she said without taking her eyes off of whoever she was looking at. I followed her gaze to this boy who is hella fine and the strage thing is have ever seen him around before and I think I would know you don't just forget a face like that. He was about 6'2 light skinned and tatted in all the right places. Right when I was about look at Amber his eyes might mine and we just starred at each other. His big brown eyes staring into my hazel one felt like the perfect connection that's when it happened .......

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