I Won't Tell if You Don't

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 DEAR DIARY:

 I think that I am in love; yes I know it's hard to understand but I think, well know that I am. His name is Tim and he is a new student at my school Ohio Prep. He has shaggy blonde hair and deep blue eyes. He's tall, tanned. He seems like he would be popular but he hasn't settled into the school yet so I still have a chance before that head cheerleader, Holly Hills, gets all over him. Oh, my name is Daphne Woods, unfortunate lame name I know but what can you do?

TUESDAY MORNING 7AM

DAPHNE'S HOUSE

"Daphne, how many times do I have to tell you to get up and out of bed, honestly?"

 Why does my mother always seem to yell at me?

 "Sorry mum, next time I'll try not to be tired in the morning"

 "What did you just say about me?"

 "Nothing mum"

 "You better not have, because you know what happens when you do!"

 "Yes mum"

 I wonder what the usual morning routine at Holly's house would be like. Would there be servants to gently wake her up, would she have breakfast in bed? or would she be like me and have her stepmother yelling at her?

TUESDAY MORNING:

 HOLLY'S HOUSE

 "Good Morning Ms. Hills, did you sleep well?"

 "Yes thank you, Franny"

 "I had the cook make you your favourite, French toast"

 "Excellent, be sure to give her my thanks."

 "I will, do you need anything else, another drink, your pillow fluffed up perhaps?"

 "No that will be all, thank you"

 "No problem Ms. Hills"

BEFORE SCHOOL:

DAPHNE'S POV

 "Seeya mum"

 "Bye, remember to come home straight from school, no dawdling, we have to go shopping for you, you need to get some better clothes not just the boring and plain ones you have now"

 "Yes mum, I'll run home from school, don't worry"

 Ok firstly, I so don't want to go shopping with Kath, she always wants me to try on the slutty clothes and that's just not me, but maybe I should try some new clothes, it would make the other girls and boys in school definitely notice me.

BEFORE SCHOOL

 HOLLY'S POV

 "Have a good day dear"

 "I will mother don't worry. Oh, I'm going to Bridget's house after school, so I won't be home until 10pm. Is that ok?"

 "Yes of course, it's very important to have a social life."

 "Thanks for understanding mother"

 "Vincent is just getting the car, are you happy enough to wait outside for him?"

 "Yes of course, a little bit of fresh air will do me good."