So I decided to rewrite this story for several reasons: (as I'm pretty sure I mentioned on one of the later chapters)
* I was in the 6th grade when I wrote it
* It happened way to fast and was all over the place
* There are no connections and no sense of plot or story at all
* I've been cringing and cringing throughout rereading the entire time
* It's just a bad piece of literary work and i want to start over
* So many typos
After about a couple of years after writing it I've been reflecting if I should actually continue on with this story or should I trash it and go write back to the chalkboard. Now I'm in the 10th grade and a way better writer than I was 4 years ago, not only have i aged and matured in writing but the story has also so far (though I've been busy with school and such) I created a little notebook where I rewrote chapters (which are much longer and aren't at all like the ones from 4 years ago). So far I have two written chapters and is currently working on chapter three.
That is all i wanted to announce, i have to change periods right now but until then infor about it will be posted on my message board.
Have a super fantastic awesome splendid amazing day!
~ Mrs. Uzumaki