Hi so this is my first story i hope you like it and will give me advice :)
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Dear diary
today is the first day of my new life . i will no longer fall in love . Ive been hurt to many times . Just please make something good come out this year . your childhood friend Saphire :)
Im the type of girl who wont let me show my feelings . Im what people would call emo but they dont kow the half of it . When i was little my father used to sexually abuse me . He would keep doing stuff to me up until i was 13 and not afraid to tell anyone , now i wont let guys come near me . it ruined my life up until he came in .
It was in the middle of school when we had a new science teacher . His name was Mr Bottomly . i know a weird name but he was just so dreamy , Im probably the best in my class at science alwyas getting the best grades . But as soon as he came in my glades started slipping .
"Saphire , i would like to see you after class at lunch please " His voice rang through my ears . that was probably the best momemt of my life but the best bits were just begining ..............
Please could you tell me what you think and get me noticed :)xxx
