First Impression

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First happy, fully rhyming poem.  Please let me know what you think.  Your opinion really helps me write better.

The first time we met

It clicked in my mind

You were harder to get

So I needed to find

A moment for me

To be all I could be

We acted like kids

Flinging caps around

There was magic in those lids

And my heart was found

After the fun

We talked for an hour

I didn't even run

When the conversation got sour

Even though I am shy

She got me through "hi"

She giggled so much

When I tickled her feet

I hope it's my touch

That reminds her i'm sweet

I want to see her again

I just don't know how

I can't go through more pain

Why can't it be now?

Until that time wakes

I'll only find fakes

That's how my happiness grew

And my heart really flew

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 19, 2011 ⏰

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