Life of Bee

Here is a little bit about my main character in the story. She is a little bit like me, if you were my parents or you know me you would say she is a lot like me.
Bee is a girl who cares only about other people, she couldn't care less about her self. When someone or her parents ask her what do you want to do? Or where do you want to go? Or even what do you want for your birthday? She says I don't care.
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It was Monday and that means another day of school, said Bee when she got woken up by her alarm clock. "Time for another day of learning" said Bee when she was walking down the hallway of her house. In the kitchen her mom was making breakfast, her dad was packing his briefcase for work and her brother was making a mess trying to eat food again.
Bee sat down at the breakfast table by her baby brother only 1/2 and her mom put a plate of food down in front of Bee, Bee began to eat until she noticed that it was almost 8:20 and her bus got her at 8:16. So Bee shoved her food down her throat and gave anyone in her family a quick kiss, then said see you all after school then she ran to the bus stop and got on the bus.
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When Bee was on the bus she overheard some girls talking about her and a boy. "I can't believe he likes Bee and not me" one girl said. "What boy are they talking about, what boy likes me?" Said Bee. The girls overheard her talking to herself they started to laugh quietly. "whatcha laughing at?" Said Bee to the girls. "Nothing" they all said.
When she got to school that morning, she went strait to her locker, then she put her backpack away, got her binder, her pencil bag and went to her best friends locker there at the locker was Alex, Cherry, Lona, and Elisa. Bee went to say "Hi" then said "See y'all at lunch" then went to here RV were the rest of her friends are. "Hi" Bee said, "Hi" they said.
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20 minutes later the bell rang. "Bye" said Bee "Bye" they said. Bee went strait to her locker. Then she went strait to her 1st period classroom, that day she had a speech on how a flower grows. Her teacher told her and a couple of other people to go and wait up by the door, Bee got into the line she was the second kid in line there were only two kids in the line. The first person who went up was David was doing his report on a Furby, David had blonde hair and blue eyes, he was Bee's second best friend besides Cherry.
"The Furby is a wild animal that usually lives in grass lands, Furby's can swim and jump up and down, a Furby is a really rare animal and it is also endangered". Said David.
Next was Bee.
"I am doing my report on how flowers grow" Bee said. "So, first the flower is planted into the ground" ...
Five minutes later. "Thank you for listening to my report on how flowers grow".
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After Bee was done with her speech she gave her report to her teacher and sat back down in her seat. After that period Bee's next period was Science, so she went to her locker and got her science book and an extra pencil. Then went strait to Science. "Ok class" said Mrs. Honey. "Everyone get out your science notebook and book, in your science book go to page 1 0 5 please". Said Mrs. Honey. "In science we will be going to be learning about water molecules and how they travel". Mrs. Honey said
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Twenty minutes later the bell rang and everyone ran out of the room to the locker then to the lunch room were everyone from the 6th grade meet to eat lunch together. Bee, Cherry, Lona, Alex, Elisa, and David with some other boys gathered and meet at one tables were they always ate lunch. There they all talked about what sports they took after school what things they are doing in school and what their favorite thing to do in school was.
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TO BE CONTINUED