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Snowball peeked her head out from her green macaroon. She sighed. "What a beautiful day." She thought to herself. She got up out of the macaroon and sauntered over to the Frisky bitz that were on the food mat.She ate some and waited for Pickles. When Snowball heard something she turned her head and saw Pickles. "Hey, Snowball!" Pickles said happily. Snowball waved to her. "So, what do you want to do today, Pickles?" That was a rhetorical question. Pickles and Snowball's eyes looked at the U shaped tunnel and their eyes locked. They both raced to the tunnel. The two stayed there for hours playing together. Then they saw Fred coming. The lady-killer as he liked to be called. "Hey kitties, looking for a good time?" He asked. " Fred, you know my answer will always be no." Pickles said cooly. Fred looked shocked.Normally all the kitties fell for him. His gelled back fur, leather jacket, and shades he might as well be a movie star. Then Cocoa and Pumpkin came in. Those two were inseparable. "What's all the commotion?" They said curiously. "Oh, well we were just finishing up weren't we Pickles?" Snowball said cooly. "Yup, just finishing up weren't we, Fred?" Fred nodded. He couldn't stand this humiliation from Pickles. He left the four alone.
      
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