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"help"

At the winx dorm
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No one's pov
Bloom was looking outside on her balcony looking down at the ground thinking about her visions
Bloom : why ? Why me ? Why can't this pain go away!?
She kept thinking about it in her head
Sky comes outside on her balcony looking at her in pain and sorrow
Sky : hey
Bloom :hey sky
Sky :hey bloom I was thinking do u want to go on a date its.. just u and me its just that ur sad about the visions I just worry about u
Bloom: OK cool (she still wasn't happy she was always sad at times )

The park ....
(Blooms pov )
I don't understand I can't understand why this person would enter my dreams and visions and make me suffer I didn't do anything
Sky : bloom , bloom u alright
Bloom : huh? Oh yea I'm fine ..
Sky : its just ... Your looking worried and confused
Bloom :Im fine
They carried on walking around untill they found a spot they liked ...they found a spot near the woods and a waterfall nearby
They carried on chatting and laughing at their little story's they were made up.... It soon became dark and the star's were out shining untill a shooting star went by but it wasn't a shooting star it was a person flying and about to hit the the trees because it was hot a burning
Bloom and sky got up and started thinking
Bloom : what was that ?
Sky : I don't know lets check it out ..
They started to run to see what hit the ground
It was a 14 year old laying on the hard cold ground unconscious
Blooms head started to hurt again she started to scream because it hurt that bad then she passed out
The 14 year old woke up in a school hospital
He kept looking around thinking
Danny:where am I ?? ..... He soon started to panic ..Sam, Tucker ,mum,dad !!

OK tell me what u think I know its really bad I never done a story before .... 15sbouton xx