sonnet ito kung mapapansin nyo ung rhyming pattern.. ginawa ko to para sa kapatid ko eh. at ito yung pinakalatest na tulang natapos ko kasi kailangan nga. hahaha.. tulad di ng ibang poems na naisulat ko na, may story din ito sinasabi...
can u post comments? PLEASE!
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A falling star in a starless night
Imagination, or sight to behold?
A dream or reality to unfold?
Whispered wish upon the quick flash of light.
Then someone's calling but out of my sight.
"Close your eyes and fear not.", the voice just told.
It's soothingly warm,no more shiv'ring cold.
Closed eyes, I laid my back feeling so light.
Melodic voice, music filled the night air.
I felt his touch like wiping all my hurt.
After so long nights, no more despair.
It's blissful! Curiosity's now at birth!
Opened my eyes. Darkness. Dream. A nightmare?
Alone. I'm lying in a cold damp earth.
love love love
-carmela
BINABASA MO ANG
Dark Dream
Poetrya sonnet with a story. pls read and leave a COMMENT! or vote? tnx..-carmela
