Her hidden Talent (editing but needs feed back)

"Oh God my head" she groaned as she racked her memories to try to figure out what had happened and where she was. She tried to sit up to look around but immediately she felt a bolt of pain shoot through her chest she involuntarily let out a sharp cry of surprise and pain before immediately collapsing back onto the bed . Out of the corner of her eye she thought she saw something or someone move as if stepping back in surprise. She tried to shift her body so that she could turn over only to find that it was much to painfully to try that. All of sudden she noticed a female nurse with auburn hair walking by so she called put to the nurse, "Excuse me miss could you tell me where I happen to be and what exactly happened to me to put me here." The nurse looked up as if she was surprised that I was alive and then she hurried over to me and said "How-how are you even conscious?" with bewilderment in her eyes as well as pity and confusion. I instinctively tried to sit up again only to gasp in pain and fall back to the bed "You really shouldn't try to sit sit up honey you might make your injuries reopen and restart the healing process." she said in a stern but caring voice. "How long was I passed out for?" I say feeling sore all over. "2 weeks" she says says casually as if it is normal to pass out for that long. "Anyway what happened to me anyway must have been pretty bad if I have been in the hospital hospital for this long" " I am not allowed to tell you you will have to wait for the doctor to tell you."

To be continued...