Dangerously special (minor editing)

Chapter 1

Chapter 1

"Summer, wake up" someone whispers.

He keeps shaking me until I finally open my eyes.

"Finally, we need to go" he says while pulling me up.

He grabs my hand and we start running.

" What's going on, who are you?" I try to say but my voice is still groggy.

He stops and turns around. He looks confused.

"You don't remember?" He says.

"Remember what?" I ask.

"There's no time to explain" he says while beginning to run again.

I snatch my hand from his,

"Tell me now!" I say raising my voice.

"I can't tell you right now you just have to trust me" he says in a calm voice.

" I'm not going anywhere until you tell me!"

" I really didn't want to do this" he says frustrated.

" Do what!"

He pulls a gun out of his bag and points it at me.

" I'm sorry" he says with a sad expression on his face.

Then he shoots me.

Jonquils P.O.V.*

I pick up her limp body. I know she'll be mad at me when she wakes up, but I knew we would have been caught if we kept stopping to talk.

I keep walking looking for any signs of danger.

'Summer looks so peaceful when she's asleep; it's probably going to be the only time I see her at peace for a while'

About an hour later

She should be waking up soon. The tranquilizer dart should only last an hour on her. I wonder what i'll say to her when she does wake up,

' Sorry I shot you but your dad sent guards to find and kill you and you just wouldn't cooperate with me so I pulled the trigger; I hope you understand'

No that's too straight forward.

I feel summer move her head to my chest.

'I wonder if she can hear how hard my heart is pounding'

She moves again, but this time faster. I can tell she is about to wake up.

I run to find a opening that is covered with trees and bushes so it is hard to spot us.

I lay her in a soft spot in the grass careful not to drop her too hard.

Slowly she opens her eyes.

Summers P.O.V.*

I open my eyes and find him staring at me with his enticing green eyes. He pulls me up slowly and I can tell he's nervous to talk to me.

" Please don't ask questions, it will only slow us down, I promise i'll tell everything you need to know" he says in a assuring tone.

"Fine, but ..." I pause remembering he's never told me his name.

"Can you at least tell me your name" I finish.

"Jonquil"

A/N*

Hi I know this story starts off slow but i promise it gets better i just need you to stick with me,since im new to the whole writing thing i would love if you can give me comments and suggestions to make this story better i promise to try to apply any comments to my writing.

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