So this is my first book I've published on here so i would appreciate if you could comment on ways i could improve or what i should continue to do. ill add a new chapter every week unless I'm not busy with school so publish days will be Tuesday and Friday. thnx :D i also want to do song lyrics at the start of each chapter so you can also suggest songs that i could use :)

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monster~paramore

 ill stop the whole world, ill stop the whole world  

from turning into a monster

and eating us alive

dont you ever wonder

how we survived

well now that your gone

the world is ours

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 ~Chapter One~

"Gagen Raine?" my teacher Mr Len said. He had dark brown hair that reached his chin. He was wearing all black from head to toe like he always did.

"here" i yelled from the back of the room. Today was our first day of year 10. My first day of high school. My guardian never let me go to school, therefore i was always home schooled. a few boys laughed when i answered Mr Len. i looked around at the boys that would be in my science, history, geography and elemteral class as well as English which we were currently in. Of course they would all be hot as all demuns are born with good looks so it would be easier to tag souls to hell when they are older. That also means i was born with good looks. sometimes i wish i was ugly. I had long, dark brown hair that i recently put blond streaks in, beautiful light green eyes which i adored and perfectly clear skin. I had a good size for my boobs, as awkward as it sounds, which were in a c cup at the moment. I had curves in all the right places and i was built. not majorly male built but in a good looking way for a girl built. I am a black-belt in karate and i love kick boxing. Ive mastered all sports but never played in any teams. Ive always trained at the stadium with the best of the best, to make sure i knew self defense and was at my strongest point. For my electives classes i have photography, art, sport, and an extra period to try out the other classes. i also have a sway and visions class that helps me learn about my ability's. having two ability's has never happened to any other male or female (the only female being me) so it makes me pretty special. when Mr Len finished the roll he got up and wrote his name on the board.

"you should all remember the people around you from last year, all except one. I know all of you have heard about the first born girl ever, and may i say it is an honour to have you in our class. Gagen, can you stand up and come to the front please?"

"call me gage please." i said whilst getting up and slithering my way to the front of the room. there were about twenty three students in our class. it was the same with all the other classes apparently.

"Gage. everyone this is Gage. this is her first day of being at sinfell high as well as being at school at all. she has been home schooled her whole life and i would like you to be nice to her. she will need a guardian for the next two weeks to look after her and to show her around. raise your hand if your wiling." all the guys raised there hand in an instant. "your choice Ms Raine" 

"wow" i muttered. " I'm going to choose five and then the class can vote for me."

"great idea! go ahead and choose your five!" i looked around the class room and payed close attention. i picked out four i wanted and looked for a fifth.

i walked to the back of the room and looked down at one of the guys i had chosen. "you"i said while tapping him on the shoulder. He walked to the front of the class room with a grin on his face while hi fiving a few of his friends on the way. i walked over to the other three and tapped them on the shoulder. i went back to the front and looked at the whole class again. Just as i was about to walk towards the last person i crumbled to the ground. a vision was coming and it wasn't going to be good. i could see him being stabbed by the homeless guy that only wanted money. then his dead body cut open flashed up next. i searched for the address while i got up and grabbed the paper from the teachers desk and wrote the address down when i figured it out. once the images stopped i fell once again to the ground. i sighed in relief when the nausea and headache disappeared. i looked up at my teacher and passed him the paper. He looked at me like a proud father would have.

"how long does he have left?"

"ten minutes. he has two sons and a daughter. his sons inherited his telepathy but his daughter is useless. tag him and after him his sons for the future."

" thankyou. ill be back in ten minutes class." he said and then he materilized out of the class room. i looked down at my nails and thought to myself, i need to get my nails done again.

"well that was something to see." one of the boys i had picked said holding his hand out to me.

"thanks." i said grabbing it and letting him help me up. " but you might not want to try it sometime, or ever for that matter."

He laughed and then smiled at me. "I'm Jude and this is Rosier, Luke, and Jace." he said pointing to the others i had chosen. Jude had sandy blonde hair that was spiked at the back and a fringe flicked to the side. he had an athletic body, was tall and bright blue eyes to top it off. Daniel and Jace had light brown hair and soft brown eyes and were average height. twins. But Luke had dark brown hair and was very built and tall, he also had dark green eyes. i smilled at him. did i mention if i really pay attention i can find out what a demuns power is? well yeah. i can.

"im Gage as you already know. you have sway?"

"Luke, as you also know and yes i have sway."  he smiled back. at that moment Mr Len materialized back into the room. he looked at me and nodded. i just smiled.

"alright so have you chosen?" i looked back at the teacher and then went and tapped on the last guys shoulder and his name was Semiazas. When the class finished voting Mr Len added the tally up. "ok. Gage's gaurdian for the next two weeks is ... luke! you must promise to take care of her Luke!" he laughed. luke came up to me and lifted me up and spun me around.

"this is going to be on hell of an experience for me. get it? one hell of an experience? oh god."

"unholy hell." i smiled. i looked back at Mr Len and smiled at him too. "my gaurdian told me that i need to collect slips from all my teachers today and hand them into the office"

"oh yes. thankyou for reminding me. here you go and here is your book that we will be studing and your book to write in." he said passing them to me.

"thankyou"

after that the rest of the day was a blur. meeting all the people in all my classes and making friends. luke took me outside of school for lunch and recess just for today which was lovely of him. he even payed or my meals.

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so there is my first chapter! hope you enjoy! :D

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