Minecraft Diaries: The years have gone down

Aphmau's P.O.V

"ZANE! STOP YOUR GOING TO FALL!" I yelled, I was to late for he fell, "NO!" I yell once again, and run down the stairs as fast I could, I almost tripping about 12 times, I then run outside and see Zane on the ground bleeding, I panicked and ran over to him " No, No Z-Zane Zane wake up ZANE WAKE UP!" I then see the glint he was talking about but I was to busy hugging Zane.

It was then the glint started to speak.
"You have feelings for him?" It asks me as I start to look up "YES HE IS MY BEST FRIEND" I yell, as tears prick in the corner of my eyes "dang, LUCINDA YOU IDIOT THIS GUYS HER BEST FRIEND" the thing growled as Lucinda walked out "sorry" she says, and looks at me, I just sat there shocked Lucinda killed Zane why!.

"Soooo ummm hayyyy aphmau umm hehe I'm sorry Look I didn't plan on him falling out the window" she says, as I cry and hug Zane more.

"Look Aphmau he's not dead you can even check his pulse" she says, I do just that and find out he is indeed not dead. I sigh in Relief, "Lucinda you are very FRICKEN Lucky I'm not going to kill you! this is the 3RD FRICKEN TIME YOU DID THIS TO ZANE! THE FIRST TIME YOU THREW A SLEEP POTION AT HIM AND THEN YOU THREW A CAT POTION THING which was adorable I got to admit but still" I mumble the last part "Aphmau you do know that I didn't mean to throw that potion at Zane, it was meant for Kawaii Chan" she says, I look at Zane again and sigh, I pick him up and start to take him inside, Once I'm inside I set him on the couch. "Ok lucinda I'm going to go make some cookies you stay here GOT IT!" I yell, as lucinda nods.

A half an hour later lucinda yells for me to come out there, I run out and I see her pointing to Zane, I slowly turn my head to Zane and Instantly know what's wrong.

Chapter end~

Damn that was a lot to right. It may not look like it but it is expecially when u don't know how to work with fucking commas and that shit and so yeah I have 53 and a little bit more pages to right as of right now I'm still writing on pieces of paper and got to tell ye guys this story is LOOOONNNG not to mention there's gonna be 2 sequels soo yeah R@R GUYS I NEED YE REVIEWS AND PS that wasn't the last of the chapter I just realised it went for four pages is all now GOOD BYE MY KIDDIES SEE YE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!