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So i walked home like any other day and did my usual routine eat a snack (preferably chips) and sit on the couch. Put the tv on as background noise while i search the web for something interesting. After that I normally sleep until my parents come home but today there was an uneasy feeling in the pit of my stomach as if something big is going to happen and my whole life will be turned upside down.
Somehow i managed to fall asleep. Well half asleep i was half way in between sleeping and day dreaming. This was until i heard this horrible shrieking. When i opened my eyes i saw a furry thing on my stomach so obviously i screamed. My death defining scream.
When i looked closer i saw a bat and actually it is kinda cute. Then out of no where the bat put his paw/claw what ever you call bat feet on my hand. It stung for a while and it hurt a lot. I stared at the bat in disbelief when i saw about to reach for it, it just flew away. Then I looked down my hand, i saw a burn mark in the shape of the bat's foot on my hand. Was this meant to mean something? Where was the bat from? Why was it here? Why me? WHY THE HELL WAS A BAT AWAKE AND FLYING AROUND IN A BUSY SUBURBAN AREA IN BROAD DAYLIGHT!!
I went to the bathroom to wash of the mark...but it wouldn't come off. I started to worry. My parents where very stern and they also inspect anything suspicious so i don't think they would believe my story. 'I don't know what happened. A bat just flew into the room with all the doors and windows locked (now that i think about it) and just stamped my hand' it was just so ridiculous!! Just as i thought that my mum walked in.
She said "Has it happened yet? Has it?" She grabbed my hand and her eyes lit up with delight. "YES IT HAS" my mum squealed in delight. "Don, Don come here" she screamed in my ear. My dad came rushing.
"WHAT WHAT WHO DIED!!?!!???" My dad shouted while through the doorway.
"Look!!" Screamed my mum once again into my ear.
I looked from my mum to my dad and back again.
"What is it? Is there something wrong with me? Whats happening?!!?"
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