Star Wars: On The Run

Chapter 1

So you already know that I'm Al Moog, a human Coruscantian. You also know that I'm being chased around the Galaxy by the Guavian Death Gang, Kanjiklub, and the First Order. But you don't know why the First Order, is after me. First off, the First Order is trying to destroy all the remains of the Jedi Order. Well, my grandma is a Jedi librarian named Jocasta Nu. She told my mother about the Jedi and it's secrets. The Galactic Empire noticed this and tried to kill my mom. She was a Rebel pilot, she flew an A-wing. She died in a collision with a TIE fighter at the second Death Star. Before she became a pilot, she told me what her mother told her about the Jedi. So the First Order now knows that I know about stuff they oppose.

So here I am on a stormtrooper transporter heading to the Finalizer, Kylo Ren's star destroyer. They captured me when I was hiding on an abandoned old Republic base on an asteroid. Ten stormtroopers are on with me, one squad. I had handcuffs on. One stormtrooper had the key to the handcuffs. That was the leader of the squad, the one with a red pauldron on his right shoulder.

Now here's the first action scene.

I kicked a stormtrooper to my right. He toppled to the ground. (Awesome ninja music in background)
I did a back flip and kicked two more behind me. As one staggered back and fell he shot a bolt from his blaster. The bolt was bouncing around the transporter and stabbed the commander. When he went down I caught the keys and unlocked the cuffs. The first stormtrooper that I kicked came to his senses and fired. I ducked, which made the bolt hit another trooper. I swung my arm, knocking the blaster out of the first trooper's hands. I grabbed it in midair and shot him. Turned around and shot the last five in five seconds. Now the pilots didn't do anything while we had a brawl. I guess they thought that the troopers could handle it. When the copilot realized I knocked everybody out, he got up and drew his pistol. I shot him first, but before he died he also fired. The blast hit my gun. The pilot didn't do anything, just kept steering. So I smashed him into a buttonless wall and took control of the ship. Turned on the com links to talk to Pirk. Pirk is my buddie. He saved me at a mall-place from the Guavians. He's cool, calm and collected. Right now, he's on the planet Kuat, on the edge of the core of the galaxy. (Now I'm not good at writing scenes with controls and stuff.) I heard his voice saying "Pirk here."

"Hey Pirk. It's Al here."

"HEY buddy!" He was so loud a burst of static filled the room. "Wait," he said confused, "My scanners tell me you're on a TE 7-822 stormtrooper transporter."

"I am. I just knocked everybody out." 

"That's my boy!" Sometimes he acts like a father to me.

"I'm coming to Kuat. Okay?"

"Alright see you there," He said. I heard a click and then silence.

I completely forgot that two TIE fighters were surrounding the transporter. Apparently, the pilot sent a signal to the TIEs when the copilot went to shoot me. I guess the signal was delayed, so I got time to talk to Pirk. 

So the TIE to my left fired. The ship jolted. Unfortunately, this thing isn't for combat, it is just for transporting troopers to destinations. I looked at the scanners and saw an asteroid field 20 miles ahead of me.

I accelerated the ship, leaving the TIEs behind. The fighters caught up in like eight seconds, unfortunately. The asteroid field is six miles ahead. I just have to keep going. The TIE to my right fired, jolting the ship into the other TIE. It didn't crash into anything, but six seconds later, it smashed into an asteroid from the field. 

The transporter was bumping into many asteroids, it's really hard to dodge a heck of a lot of asteroids. I plan on traveling through hyperspace after I leave this field. There weren't many tiny asteroids at this point, most of them are bigger than previous asteroids. (Man, I'm saying asteroids way too much lately.) 

The TIE fired once again. I made the ship sink in the not-air a little bit, leading the blast to an asteroid. When the space rock exploded a chunk of it smashed into the TIE.

Everything was fine until another piece of the asteroid rammed into the transporter. The thing was flying and spinning, making me almost barf in my mouth. A siren was blaring, and the inside of this ship was filled with red light.

The ship started falling down to a planet. (BTW, a planet was next to the asteroid field.)

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Nice first chapter at 850 words.

BTW, the 3rd chapter of Sacred Sword will come soon, I'm just too lazy to write it and I was writing this :D.