Our Little Tragedy

Max Heart

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Who is she? Why does she only have one friend? I mean she's pretty and cool. Why only have one friend? She has beautiful long curly brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. She has a beautiful laugh but I've never spoke to her. She intrigues me. Which is wierd. Not one girl has intrigued me since my dad left.
"MAX!!!" Chris yelled
"What?!!" I asked a little scared
"I've been calling your name for the past minute. What's up?" He asked
"He likes her" David said
"No man he doesn't like her"Alex entered
"Exactly" I said
"He wants to do her" Alex countered
"What!" I yelled
"Where just kidding, so what's up?" David  asked
"Nothing man" I responded
"Yeah right. You wouldn't stop staring at Bell for the whole lunch" Alex said
"How about you leave him alone guys." Ace said a bit annoyed
"Whatever, mind your own business." I snapped
Everyone went silent. I picked up my tray and left.
Now that is my group of friends
Alex is blonde and very down to earth he has blue eyes and is a bit skinny.
Chris is brown eyed with brown hair he loves painting and being wierd. Ace is the quiet one he only talks if he's talked to. He had a rough child hood. It's very hard to get to know him. David is just there he isn't anyone's best friend he just has no where to go. So we took him in.

On the way out I heard a girl crying I turned the corner and saw Bell crying and another girl kneeling down with her asking how much more time does she have with him yet. Who is this guy? Why did he make her cry? I want to help her.
And that's what I'll do.
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