Esdeath X Tatsumi

Tatsumi the ice wielder

This fanfiction was based off some other fanfiction I read

A young man who has brown hair and is wearing a white cloak strolls around the imperial city, with eyes scanning the area, for something, or someone, or a group of people.

Tatsumi Pov

I sigh, I look around the area looking for a group, I see the people I want revenge on posters everywhere around the city, I think the groups name is called 'night raid'. My reasoning for why I want to murder night raid, is that they had attacked my village and had murdered everyone, when I was about 5 years old. After that incident I wandered around and eventually met a ice danger beast teaching me how to wield the element ice. I trained for 10 years with the danger beast, and practically mastered wielding ice.

I stroll around with a cautious observation of my surroundings, I past a poster that says  there will be a fighting tournament hosted, and that the winner gets money as reward. I think to myself and the nod, why don't I enter to earn some extra cash and what is the strange mark on the poster at the bottom? I stroll around the city more waiting for night fall. I then climb the highest point I see and scan the area. I stay up there for a good hour and a half monitoring every little movement. I sigh nothing today huh? I then jump down onto a lower roof then to the ground and walk up to the nearest inn and walk up to the counter and say "can I have a room for a night" the kind sir behind the counter nods and throws me a key after I payed. I walk into the room and flop on to the bed and fall asleep.
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I'm writing this for fun btw
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