Troubled

This is my first story that I’m uploading, I wasn't going to but my friends persuaded me to so thanks Danni this is for you, tell me what you think. I am not going to continue this story if you don't.

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Lotuslotte

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Chapter one

Squelch, Squelch goo running down my face a slippery tongue persuading me, sweetly but forcefully to open my eyes. There's no point fighting him, so I might as well give in, but I hesitate one second to long. I start feeling feet pawing at my face. Whoops now I’m in trouble.

I open my eyes only to find another staring back. Deep green, some might call them a jade green. But to me they are seemed to be a forest green. That is while all the trees still have all there leaves, before autumn winds set in and steel their beauty. There is a dark silhouette attached to those magnificent eyes. Maybe he's hungry. I think to myself but deep down there is a self realisation, an epiphany in wait.

They're coming

Bang starts to whine his ears twitching and nostrils flaring. His armour hardening, heartbeat fastening with anticipation. Eyes glazing over as if he can feel the presence of the oncoming intruders.

They'll be hear any second knowledge and wisdom fill my mind. A plan already in the making. It will be a close one but once we reach the forest line, we will be safe. They can't enter there its sacred grounds. As if Bang can read my mind he kneels down. I jump aboard without a second of hesitation. A month ago I would have been scared out of my wits, at the thought of riding Bang. In a way I guess I am kind of proud, of the way I am facing my fears. There's no time to worry about that now, get a move on. I can practically hear my father’s voice in my head. Yelling me to move, head for cover. Band leapt to his feet, running and striding with precision. I could the strong muscles behind the leathery skin.

I can see the forest line up ahead. When suddenly a figure jumps up and attacks Bang. He was waiting for us he knew where we were going. NO, I’m stuffed what am I going to do. All those years of being so careful. Always moving from place to place. Running away from home, to protect Bang.

WASTED

As I lay there, Bang beside me still trying to fight of the enemy. I steal one last glance at him. Then I mentally kick myself for being so doubtful. There is a chance we might still pull through this, it may be small and minimal but there is a chance.

Bang is graceful and swan-like, but still manages to be fearsome and powerful. At the same time. Thick muscles placed under that thick leathery armour. He attacks and defends all at the same time. He is the most amazing creature the world has ever seen. And he is all MINE. The creature on the other hand is small and gruesome.  It has sharp pointed teeth that you can easily see are made for eating meat. He is ginning madly at us, it’s a malicious grin. That says I know something you don't. His eyes are narrow slits, staring intently at Bang. It is obvious there is a plan forming in his mind. It’s like you can see the wheels turning in his evil little head. Then he strikes at Bang with his clubbed tail. But Bang already saw this coming; he breaks through the creatures defences. Striking him with a fatal blow. It was a quick death, he experienced no pain. Even though he was evil and he wanted to kill us, no animal or human deserves to be tortured. Though he does say one thing before he passes onto the next life.