Trapped

CHAPTER 2

HELLO ALL YOU LOVELY PEOPLE! So this is my first "rewritten chapter". Can I get an AYO? AYOOOO! hehe. (Another note: this is the second time I had to post this because it messed up and formed a whole other book)

ERINS POV

I woke up to see a smirking Louis Tomlinson drawing a sharpie mustache on Zayn.

"Louis?" I asked. He jumped a little when I said that, since he obviously didn't know I was awake. "oh god! Edith you scared me!" he exclaimed, managing to wake up Niall and Harry, who also had moustaches drawn on their faces.

"My name is Erin" I corrected him "And why are you drawing moustaches on everyone?"

He laughed a guilty laugh. 'I got bored" was his answer. "Does this mean that I have a moustache too?" I ask and touch my upper lip.

He holds up a mirror to my face and starts to laugh at my expression.

"Louis! This is permanent marker!" Harry yelled. Louis erupted with laughter.

Me and Niall both shushed them. "There could still be people out there" Liam warned. "Oh hey Liam, I didn't know that you were awake!" I greeted him.

"Julianne is asleep on her face" Niall remarked and gestured to Julianne, who was mumbling something In her sleep.

"What is she saying?" Niall asked.

"I don't know. I'm sure she is dreaming about something" I answer. Having tolerated Julianne for the past 12 years, I knew about how much she sleep talked.

She suddenly rolled to her back and yelled "Go away!"

"Who is she talking to?" Harry asked. "Who knows" I answer him.

"FLOPSTER I SAID GO AWAY!" she screamed. I winced at the sound.

Before the boys were able to ask the question that I knew they were about to ask, I answered them. "Flopster is her dog, and the reason we are in this closet at the moment"

They nodded understandingly

"I have an idea!" Niall exclaimed and crawled over to Julianne. He leaned really close to her ear and then shouted "FEED ME! FEED ME!"

"NOOOOOO I WILL LATER!" she shouted. We all snickered.

"FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED ME!" Niall yelled again. "Not right now!" Julianne yelled with a hint of irritation in her voice.

Niall began to make whiney dog noises while everybody else was trying not to burst out laughing.

"UGGG. FINE!" Julianne exclaimed and then proceeded to stand up, start walking, and crash into a shelf.

Julianne snapped out of her sleeping trance immediately and then fell onto her butt.

The room was filled with the sound of everybody laughing. "What just happened?" Julianne asked, Oblivious to what had just happened.

"You... gasp... were sleep talking... gasp... and...long breath.. and Niall pretended to be flopster...wheeze... and you believed it-t-t-t" I managed to choke out through my laughter.

Julianne chuckled a little. "So are there still people outside the door?"

"We forgot about that..." Liam answered. "Lets check"

We all went silent as I slowly crept to the door and slightly opened it. " So what is out there?" Louis asked impatiently.

"The store Is closed. There is nobody here but us"

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I couldn't be more exited about rewriting trapped! this will be fun!

Pretty please vote, comment, and suggest this fanfiction to your friends! Maybe we could get it back into the top fanfictions like it used to be?

Also, if you want an image of what Julianne might look like, imagine Lisa Schwartz without bangs. I might add in a pic on next chapter!

Hopefully I will write again sometime soon! I LUFF YOUUUUUUUUUUU <3

-Julianne :3