October 7, 2016
"Look what you did to yourself. You should've never severed that bond with that human."
She sees him writhing in pain. Tears were streaming down his wounded face and his energy began to wane every time the clock ticks.
He breathes in deeply, through all the agony he'd been through without a bond to strengthen his lifeline, he managed a smug smile.
"Shut up, I've survived for a year and a half. Nobody's ever done that before."
"Ever so unwis foolish, little brother." She crouched down and caressed the boy's face. "You should look for another human before it's too late."
He scoffs, straining his body to sit up, but to no avail.
"I-I can survive for another year."
There was a sound of an exasperated sigh, "Your stubbornness won't get you anywhere, brother mine." She stared right into her brother's eyes, hoping that her words have gotten into his thick skull. But the brother showed no signs of cessation.
"Fine," the sister stated, "You don't want to look for your own human? I'll look for him myself."
She stood up, swished her large cape over herself and disappeared in a flame of red lights.
The brother looked at the remnants left by the burning flame. Then he stood himself up and limped his way towards a small, shallow basin. He touched the water lightly and muttered an incantation. The water swirled as if it were alive and formed an almost realistic figure of a girl. Her features were aristocratic; milky-white skin, chocolate brown hair, perfectly-shaped lips...
But something was different.
Her eyes... Each one had a distinct color. The right eye was brown; same as her hair. While the left one was a faded shade of blue and green.
"You don't need to look for another human, sister. I've already found one."
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Heyo!
Just wanna say that this is my first original story and I really hope this doesn't flop. (And hoping that I won't run out of inspiration)
So, yeah, any thoughts on the prologue? *feedback pls* :>
Peace out, frens
— A[Pls do note: I haven't proofread any of these so watch out for bad grammar and misspelling because English isn't my mother language.]
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