Criticism

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Al the happiness I had

Has now been drained

The only thing I feel now

Is numbness and pain

Every single time

You critisize

The words keep rerunning

Through my mind

All I think of is weakness

As tears stain my cheeks

I roll up my sleeve

As sobs leave my lips

Everything that you said

Comes charging at me

The only thing left

Is my silent plead

I know that it's wrong

That it's a mistake

Yet my heart is long done

Listening to my head

I dont hesitate

As the tears blur my sight

The pain is overwhelming

But brings on a light

After 5 slashes

I decide it's enough

I put down the razor

And hide my new cuts

I always thought

I could clearly see

But now the darkness has overtaken

And I'll never be free. 

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 28, 2013 ⏰

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