Hi Guys,
I've written this short story for a competition, and I wanted to run it past you guys first. It's not Monchele and I just want to say that I'm going to start to pull away from Monchele but carry on writing glee stories that might feature monchele every now and then. Anyway, I would be really grateful if you could give honest feedback to this story because I know it's not good but I just want you guys to give me feedback on how I can improve it. It's been hard to write because I have a limit of 750 words and I've only just managed to keep inside that writing 746 words. It is not based on Aladin but the title does make sence.
Thanks Emily xxx
