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4/22 apathetic; thequeenofscreams

Fanfiction Of The Week

dedicated to thequeenofscreams

Title: Apathetic

Love Interest: Jasper Hale

Summary:"We were both created in chaos, we were both born to destroy. You were like death, and I was like war. And when we collided, darling, I loved you."

There was never the time or place in Kira Hewitt's life for her to particularly care for anyone aside from her parents. Ever since she could remember, the little family of three moved from place to place. Her father was always changing states because he was some high official government officer. It had always been cities, though, so Kira couldn't even begin to fathom why she was getting shipped off to some rainy town in Washington with the same name as a kitchen utensil. "To think that I hate you is highly arrogant, considering that in order to hate you I would actually have to care about you."

REVIEW FROM -shadowpreacher

Kira is my spirit animal ngl. I love how she stands for what she believes in. It was nice to see that she didn't fully accept Jasper as her mate when she first met him, unlike Bella. I read this book in one night because I was so obsessed with it. Kira and Paul are BROTP. I liked how Kira didn't take anyone's shit. Kira is the queen of everything. Your book was definitely one of the best Twilight fanfictions I've ever read.

REVIEW FROM PlasticDemon
I am not a huge twilight fan but i loved your book it makes me want to watch twilight.
I love the name Kira (im teen wolf trash) and I love how strong she is.
I seriously love your book.

REVIEW FROM candlesforlexa

I absolutely love Jasper, he's my favorite in the Twilight serious. I'm loving Kira's name (im such teen wolf trash it's crazy). I love how she was stone cold at first. I also love the fact that you made her the pack's "Yoda". I am now in love with your story. Its amazing. 

REVIEW FROM greenberg_
I could tell this book was going to be a keeper when I read the playlist. I saw my two queens (marina and the diamonds + halsey) and I am trash. But moving on, the prologue was another thing that caught my eye. The description was amazing and the words were well thought out and articulate. Kira Hewitt is one of my favorite original characters and can we please talk about her name? Mason Hewitt and Kira Yukimura aka my cinnamon roll (im teen wolf trash). What I love best about her is her sarcastic personality and her dislike with talking to other people. I recommend this story to anyone who loves twilight because this book is nothing short of amazing (also i am jasper trash).

REVIEW FROM gaygrounders

I am not a huge fan of twilight so I don't read many twilight fan fictions, but this one was absolutely fabulous. I loved Kira and she was such a strong independent women and I just love that. She was smart and sarcastic at some points. The writing was great and I don't think I saw any grammatical errors. The only thing I had a problem with was that Jasper kinda fell in love with her very quickly which was only a minor detail that doesn't really matter. Besides that I loved everything about it and I am excited to read more of your stories.

REVIEW FROM nevergo_outof_STILES

I admit I don't read many twilight fan fictions (this is, in all actuality, the only one I have read), thus not having many to compare it to. But, your story was amazing with it's great detail and independent main character. I also admire about this book how you didn't have Kira be the 'damsel in distress' how most fictional books/movies have their female characters. Kira is definitely one of my favorite OCs I've read about in fan fics. I will definitely be recommending this to my twilight obsessed best friend.