Flamesky's Omen

Mama?

"Mama! Mama! Look what I drew!" Flamekit showed her mother, Sparktail, what she had drawn on the side of the den. Flamekit was the runt of the litter, and she was small for her age considering she was already 5 moons old. Thankfully her brother, Tallkit, and her sister, Mosskit, where nice to her and would actually play with her unlike the other kits (Nightkit was also one of her friends but she comes in later). Flamekit's mother has been sad ever since there father has died, her mother has been really sick and seemed really sad. Flamekit was actually really worried for her mothers health.
Sparktail only glanced at Flamekit's drawing on the side of the den, "That's beautiful Flamekit..." She mewed with her voice slowly getting quieter as she continued talking.
"Are you sure your not sick again mama?" Flamekit was really scared for her mother now. "I'll be fine Flamekit, it's late and we should all be asleep. Now head to bed and I will met you and your siblings in their okay?" Flamekit just looked at her paws and mumbled as she headed back to bed. She saw Mosskit and Tallkit were already in bed sound asleep, so without waking them she curled into a ball and feel asleep.
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Flamekit opened her eyes and stretched, but somethings was unusual... She was freezing and she could smell something and it smelt like crow-food. She gets up and shakes her mother, "Mama? Are you okay? You seem really cold..." Flamekit started to panic a little
No... She can't be dead! She just can't be!
Flamekit tried to wake up her mother again, but still no response. She tries one more time, but it was too late... Her mother was dead and there was nothing she could do about it and it was all her fault...
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I know it's sad for a first chapter but if people actually like it then I will continue but idk. If people actually read it then I will update but until then enjoy!