The arrival

Chapter 1,
Elita and her team of femme bots stood primed and ready for any decepticon attack,
She had taken safety measures to alter her base safety programmes since earlier she had received a distress call from an unknown Autobot signal.
How did 'it' reach us? Elita thought as she stood in her battle stance in front of the main door
All they knew was that we perished on Cybertron, or so they thought, but they couldn't have picked up our life signal in this god forsaken rock! Elita yet again thought in her mind.
She clenched her energon sword in her left hand and winced her optics "no.." She said under her breath as she thought about them knowing about her.
Soon enough Elita's first lettenet and best friend ran down the hallway screaming "Elita! ELITA!!!" At the top of her voice, elita turned around shocked by seeing Chromia run down the path "C-Chromia?" Elita said as she ran into Elita and put her hand on her shoulder, leaned her head down and panted "what's wrong?" She asked curiously, but her question had been answered before Chromia could reply.
A predacon ran down the path spitting fire everywhere, her optics widened and Elita, Chromia, Moonracer, Firestar, Greenlight, Beta and Lancer all backed up against the door to the main control room.
"No body move a servo" but it was too late the Predacon let out a ear shattering scream "in here! IN HERE!!!" Elita yelled panicking. The femmes all rushed into the room as Elita opened the door.
They entered the pitch black room and Moonracer suddenly screamed out "We're all going to die!!!!" Then Firestar added "we'll never make it!!" Then of course Beta added "Im too young to go offline!!!!!!!!!" Even though she was older than most of us. Lancer wa she eldest and Greenlight was the youngest.
"Girls! Stop shouting!" Elita yelled at the yapping femmes behind her,
"I have a plan, this morning we received a call from a autobot base near Jasper, Nevada if we dial that profile we van get a bridge out of here!" The team nodded and agreed with her answer.
Elita called but as soon as they answered the Predacon broke down the door and the rest if them pushed the door in its face to try to keep it from biting them
"H-hello? Autobot base #43568912 or team prime? Please help! This is a distress call! Needing immediate back up! Code name Predacon! I repeat code name Predacon!" Just then Lancer butted in "just hurry it up, will ya!" Then Elita turned back to the screen and pleaded "please" the caller hung up and a bridge opened to their left "Elita! Go!"
"I'm not leaving without you!" She thought back tears
"We'll be right behind you! Go!"
Elita ran to the bridge and halfway through she turned to look back, there was still no sign of them.
She walked back to the base and saw nothing but a blazing inferno and dead frames
"No!" She extended her hand out and shook her head in disbelief.
She cried while she ran to her destination and the autobots on the other side saw the sobbing pink frame run thought the ground bridge. She tripped over her foot, fell face first and sat up and weeped.

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Should I continue or abandon?
Please comment! Thanks!
~Elita One (me!)
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