Maze Runner Prefrences

Newt - Imagine

It's been three months in the glade. You were doing your job as a track-hoe, when Newt came up to you. He seemed to hate you, so you hated him. "Y/N, why do you seem to be slacking?"
     "What do you mean?"
     "Everybody here, is working hard. You are just taking your bloody time."
     "She was here first, and hasn't taken a break yet." Zart interjected.
     Newt didn't listen. "You just get back to work." He said and started walking away.
     "Why do you hate me?"
     "What?" He said with fury in his eyes.
     "You are always so rude to me. You never treat me like the other gladers and you hate me!" You knew it probably wasn't smart to yell at him like this, but you couldn't stop yourself. "I wanted to be friends when I first met you. I thought you were nice. Stupidest thing I ever thought. I bloody hate you!" You finish mocking his accent.
     Everyone knew why Newt hated you, but they wouldn't say. They should have expected you to have an outburst. He treated you wrong all the time. You realize what had just happened, and regretted what you just said.
     "You started it."
     "When? I just want to know what I did! Tell me!"
    "Hey! What's going on here?" Alby cut us off with Zart by his side. Of course he would tell Alby.
     You just stood quietly, but Newt had other plans. "She was just doing what she does. She was slacking, being rude, and I had to put her in her place."
    "That's not what Zart said. You two need to come with me."
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     He brought us to the slammer. "You will stay in there until you work out your differences." Then he just walked away.
     "This is your fault." Newt stated angrily.
     "I'm sorry."
     "You should have listened to me."
     "I know."
     "You are so annoying and rude."
     You really were sorry. You wished you would have known what you did. You hoped that by not standing up for yourself, would get you out of this cell factor. Newt was really getting to you, though. He kept ranting on about how much he hated you. As tears started forming in your eyes, he noticed.
     "Now you're crying." He said softly.
     "Yes, sir." You tried to sound sarcastic, but you sounded weak.
     "Why?"
     You couldn't answer.
     "Please, tell me."
     "No."
     "If I tell you why I was so mean, will you?"
     You nodded.
     "When you came up in the box, I thought you were amazing. You looked so scared, but beautiful at the same time. Alby said no one could flirt with you. I really liked you, and I thought that I would have to do the opposite. I knew you were tough," he was tearing up. Maybe, he actually cared. "I'm sorry. I just couldn't let you know I liked you."
     "I for-forgive you."
     "Will you tell me why you let me get to you?"
     "I-I thought you were so nice and sweet. Then you changed. I had liked you, but then I had to hate you, because you hated me."
     He didn't know how to answer that, so you both sat in silence. After a while, you noticed him looking at you. You just smiled and he did something you would never think of doing.
     "I like you."
     He said it. Both of you were too scared to say it, until now. That's why you hated each other.
     "I like you, too"

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