My life in hell

I am a survivor even in death I fight for life. There is no peace after you die. Most people join gangs for protection against the crazies and wonders.those are the people that went insane after learning the truth. That what they so blindly put faith in was a lie. I am on my own though I won't join I gang I can fend for myself. They don't respect women and they are treated as slaves I was a slave in life I will not be one in death.

I have heard that there is a kingdom past the mountains that houses the king of this reched place. I aim to kill him. They say he is so ugly one look will kill you and he has a sword that causes earth quakes. But he bleeds so he can die. I will be set free of this prison once he had died. So I am leaving for my journey to kill the most dangerous man alive.

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