Number 1: Clothing

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Let's be honest, nobody reading your story wants to hear about what the character decides to wear.

It wouldn't be bad everyone once in a blue moon, but people decide to make it so cliché that it makes other want to rip their eyes out.

For example;
*Cue the extremely girly voice*
After I hopped out of the shower, I ran to the closet and grabbed a pair of leggings, the expensive kind, a crop top, and a pair of flats.
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Like, seriously?

Anyways, that leads me to another point.
When you decide to explain the whole shower and make up process, it kind of makes people want to crawl in a hole and hide. If you are one of these people who writes this kind of stuff, I bet you would want to too if you read your own story.

I would say that I have mentally murdered myself 20000+ times considering how many times I have read books like these.

So please, stop writing shitty cliché stuff before you cause people to murder themselves.

Thank you.

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