unbroken promises *louis tolminson fan fiction*

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charaters:

 Eleanor Calder as Eleanor Calder

 Louis Tolminson as Louis Tolminson

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        CHAPTER 1:

  ''Eleanor lets say we both did the project together and have you do all the work'' Louis said.

  ''What ever im not failing because of your stupidy.'' i said walking away as fast as i could.

  ugh well there you have it Louis Tolminson the most popular guy in school he can get anyone to do what ever he wants and i hate it. Damn it i just let it happen. damn it Eleanor your so stupid. i thought to my self. i heard running feet and Louis stood in my way. this should be good.

  ''im not stupid.'' he said crossing his arms.

  ''sure you aren't and leaving me doing the project because i am smarter than you'' i said glaring at him.

  ''yo! Bret what are you talking to Eliza for?''

  ''its eleanor .''

  ''what ever'' his dumb jock friend said.

  i turned on my heals and walked away. he lives right next door to me i don't see why he cant get his lazy ass off of the couch and do work? its pathetic. it really is. i am tired and just want to go home. i took out my boring ole SideKick and checked the time. 2:30 time to go home whoo hoo!!

i walked down the school steps and onto the side walk. i walked until i met the coffee shop i worked at and turned left. i stopped at the apparments and walked to the elevator. i pressed the up botton then stepped on. i pressed the A12 the elevator doors were about to close but then the doors stopped and came in Louis. great just great.

   ''im working on the project with you''

   ''do you know anything about science?''

   ''well no i cant focus''

   ''why?''

   ''because there is so many sexy girls in the fucking class then there is you.'' he said.

   ''well that's rude'' the elevator had little mirrors and i looked into one. i saw my face and why would anyone want to date me. no makeup hair in a ugly messy bun all the time.

  ''you would be pretty hot if you changed.''

   ''i would never change for anyone'' i said and the elevator doors opened up and i walked out.

   ''not even for the most popular guy in school that can help you be queen bee by the end of the month''

  ''how would i know your not just going to make me look like a fool?'' i asked unlocking the door and walking in.

  Louis stood there. ''you can come in'' he walked in and shut the door.

  ''well you can start by letting your hair down.'' he said walking towards me and took out my bun. ''your hair is long'' he said looking at my brown waves.

  ''i hate it'' i said turning around and walking away.

  i went into my bathroom and Louis followed me.

  ''but you look better.''

  ''it reminds me of my mum and i don't want to remember her!'' i said looking into the mirror having my hands on the sink.

  ''why?''

  ''i cant say''

  ''why not?'' he asked coming behind me.

  ''theres reasons and you cant know''

  ''okay but why don't you want to look nice?''

  ''im not soposed to.''

  ''you can if you want''

  ''well true but..'' i said turning around to come face to face with him. we were a little close for my liking so i backed up a little bit.

 ''but what?''

  ''no one likes me''

  ''tons of people do''

  ''yeah the math people and the teachers because im smart i can never be like you or Pricilla. or my mum;'' i said the last part just above a whisper.

  ''you can be if you try el.''

  ''where did you get that nickname from?''

  ''i always heard your dad call you that.''

  ''and your not my dad so don't call me that. never ever'' i said.

  ''promise.''

  ''don't break any promises you make with me because i will never trust you.''

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