The superior one

The real origin

Percy Parker never was like his grandPa Peter Parker. He was kept away from spiders by his father.His father Drake Parker never liked the idea that Percy would be like his father. Peter told Drake that his powers would not be with him but with Drake's son. At this time Drake didn't know what it meant.It meant that every other generation would have peter's powers.It was almost Percy's fourteenth birthday and Peter said that would be the time Percy would get his powers.Drake called him a liar  because  it was after Percy's birthday and he still didn't have powers.A year later carnage came back and attacked midtown high school. Percy, Eduardo, Anais and Jessica escaped to the chemistry lab. Carnage found them and chained them with his webbing to a wall. Carnage fed something to Eduardo that caused him to go crazy and they both were trying to rip Percy apart. At that moment Percy disappeared and stabbed carnage in the back with electric web sword. It looked like he knew what he was doing he instantly webbed carnage's mouth,so that his scream of pain would not warn infected Eduardo. Percy started to swing around as Eduardo tried to web him with his red webbing. Percy somehow formed a electricity ball and threw it at him. The electric force of the ball caused the web skin to fall of and Percy caught it in a jar. Peter then appeared in his spiderman suit, but fainted and kept mumbling,
"The webforce is shattered." An hour later Peter woke up with a gun to his head. Percy was held in custody when he saw a glance of his grandfather. He focus very hard and with a green explosion the world slowed down and he walked to his grandfather. The man that held a gun to Peter's head was deadpool and Percy grabbed one of his swords and stabbed him right through the heart. The world went back to normal and deadpool almost shot Percy , but Percy shot a web to deadpool somehow disabling his whole body. Percy took Peter back home and Peter looked into Percy's eyes. Peter said,
"I'm so proud of you my baby spidey." He grabbed Percy's hand and gave him some glasses. Percy then replied,
"My glasses are fine I don't need them." Peter told him to put them l and say,
"I in the webforce know." Percy said the exact same thing and a suit formed on him. It was like Spider-Man 2099's but where the blue and red where there was green and gray. Right before the story ends Peter says,
"With great power comes great responsibility, so you use it well don't disappoint me!" Percy replied,
"Don't worry I'm like 2099, but superior, I'm superior 2099 spiderman!"

I hope you enjoyed the story it's my first one. I tried to add flash powers, but it might not work. Tell me if you want me to continue the story and if not thank you for reading my story. Bye have a great time!!