Hey guys this is just a quick story that I wrote to past time. Sorry it is really quick and barely a paragraph. I wanted to make it short to make you think curiously. Thanks guys constructive criticism greatly appreciated!!!!
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My heartbeat quickens.
Beads of sweat fall down my sunburnt face. My legs give way and I plummet to the ground.
My will to get up is close to nothing. Using the small amount of energy I have left I haul my body off the ground.
I hold the passing rocks, trees and bushes passing by, to keep me on my feet.
Everything starts moving rapidly, making my head hurt. I fall backwards, the hard ground knocking the wind out of my exhausted body.
This is it. There is nothing more I can do. There is no point in using the last ounce of energy I have to get up, only to fall back down again.
As my breaths become shorter and my limbs become limp I swear I could hear the faint sound of helicopters descending from the sky.
