The New Bad Boy

Hey beauties! So I'm new at this so I'm giving it my best shot. Please comment and tell me EXACTLY what you think of my book. Also I don't mind if you tell me to update. I will only update one chapter for now and wiat for you guys to tell  me what you think, please don't be shy. Tell me to update if you love it!!  So without further ado the first bit of the first chapter. 

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Chapter 1

“Chris Melanie is here with her parents so go play in the play room.” My mother told me walking into my room where I was lounging on my bed.

“Okay Ma.” I got up and walked down the spiral staircase to the living room where Melanie Tapaia,  the most beautiful girl I had ever met was waiting on the white corner couch with her parents drinking a soda. I stopped in my tracks when I saw her. Her blonde hair was down which was unusual, she normally had It up because she was athletic. She was wearing a blue dress that ended just above her knees that brought out the gold specks in her vibrant green eyes.

I cleared my throat. “Melanie would you like to go watch tv in the play room?” I asked suddenly shy. I’ve none Melanie my whole life but we were never that close. We would hang out a bit when my parents would get together with hers but that’s it.

“Sure.” She smiled and got up.

We walked down the soft blue hallways to the bright blue play room in silence. “I like your hair down like tthat Mel.” I said my face burning. “I mean it uh looks really pretty down. I um yeah.” I mumbled looking down.

“Chris.” She stopped and gripped my arm gently. “You don’t need to be shy around me. We have known each other forever. We’ve bathed together. So relax.” She told me letting go and walking down the hallway. I could feel where she touched me and longed for her to touch me again. That moment changed everything for me.

‘Okay’ I thought to myself. ‘I can be confident and ask her out.’