That Crush

Nightmare

Hey guys😀 I'm Zee I'm a beginner so go easy on me.

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(Slam) The door closed as Sarah arrives home from school. "Mom"..."mom" she calls, walking towards the living room. "Mom, what happened, are you okay?" She asked, seeing all the blood on the floor. Sarah gets up and runs to the kitchen table to get her phone from her bag. She calls 911 and tells them her mom was on the floor in a pool of blood.

After telling the man on the phone her mom was shoot in the chest, Sarah heard foot steps behind her and she turned around to find a young man with a gun in his hand. The guy told her to hang up the phone or he'll shoot her in the head. Sarah put her phone on the table and stepped back from the guy so she could run, but he grabbed her arm to fast and pulled her back to him. "Move again and I'll kill you slow, then I'll wait for your brother and father to come home and kill them too." "Do you want money? Because I can give you all the money I have in my box upstairs in my room." Sarah said to him with tears in her eyes. "Okay, walk to your room and if you try anything your dead" he said. "It's upstairs, I'll go get it and come back"... " I'm coming with you stupid, I can't trust you ...you may call someone up there" he told her.

They walked up the stairs as the guy put the gun to Sarah's lower back. Making their way two doors down the right side of the hallway before opening the door to Sarah's blue, purple, red, and black covered bedroom walls. He closed and locked the door as Sarah runs to her dresser and grabbed the money out of a purple and blue wooden box. "Here, here's about three thousand five hundred dollars, just take it all" Sarah said with a shaky voice. "I don't want your money stupid" he said. "What, what are you talking about just take the money I won't tell anyone about this"... "I said i don't want the money, I want you" he starts to point the gun up at Sarah's stomach then slide it up to her chest and back down to her left thigh.

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Short Ik but I'm not really a writer I'm just doing this for fun.

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