He's so Perfect...

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    Today was Flamepaw's resting day, she was glad too. Cinderpelt has been training her a lot the past week. Nightpaw had to go on a patrol that morning, so she was eating alone. As she finished, she saw Ravenpaw walk out of the apprentice dean and he looked so amazing... He's a muscular black tom, with white paws. He looked at Flamepaw, and she started to blush. She looked away, and she could hear him walking toward her "Good morning Flamepaw. Did you sleep well?" Flamepaw stood up and responded, "Yeah, what about you?" He smiled and replied "I slept well." Flamepaw loved his smile, she started blushing even more, but she stayed where she was. His smile faded and turned into a concerning look as he looked in her eyes, "You know I'm here if you ever need me..." she looked at her paw "Yeah... I know." He looked at her with this look... He has never looked at her like that before... it was a look she hasn't seen in a while... It's a look of love and caring... she felt a fire start in her heart at she felt she may have a chance with him. But then she remembered that he was still dating Ashpaw, and she didn't even want to think about it, it would just couse more stress for her. "Can we go on a walk?" Ravenpaw aked, and Flamepaw looked at him happily "I would love too!" then she remembered about Ashpaw. "But wouldn't Ashpaw get suspicious?" He looked at her with a grin and said "Naw, she won't if I tell her I needed to talk to you privately." "Well if you say so." And they headed out of the camp into the forest.

     As they walked, Ravenpaw had been glancing at Flamepaw's check  where Ashpaw scratched her. "Who scratch you?" Ravenpaw said with a look of concern on his face. Flamepaw just looked at her paws and keep walking. She finally found the courage to tell him who it was. "It... it w-was... Ashpaw..." she couldn't bare to see the look on his face when she told him, she knew he wouldent belive her."what do you mean? Ashpaw would never hurt anyone... I don't understand..." Flamepaw, starting to tear up "I'm not surprised that you haven't noticed... Every scar I have other that on my paws... Are from her..." Ravenpaw stops "I honestly don't understand Flamepaw... why would she hurt you?" Flamepaw looks at Ravenpaw, not able to hold her tears any longer, she cries and starts to raise her voice. "I don't know! Ask her yourself! She has always hated me! But what am I saying... Everyone hates me!" As Flamepaw runs off, Ravenpaw just stare blankly after her... and Flamepaw wondered if he will ever look at her that same way as he does with Ashpaw... But that will probably never happen...

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