Seductive Songs

Chapter 1 Battle Scars

Hi Hi this is the author here I would like you all to know that this is just a story for fun I shall dub all my readers with a nickname of sorts later hehehe anyway if I make a grammar, punctuation or some other kind of mistake let me know and I'll fix it up as soon as possible -side note some mistakes might be on purpose I'll let you know if this is so-   I hope you enjoy my book and I'll let you know if anything changes
All righty time for it to start

~~~~~~~~ Salenia's Pov

I woke to a terrible screeching and the screams of the people I love, as quickly as my waking form could muster I get up and throw on a shirt I then swim down stairs to help my family, the worst scenarios playing around in my head over and over, as I reach the bottom I see that my younger brother who is only young 400 years old and to curious about land walkers for his own good; well as I was saying I see him holding a magnificent white bird in a bubble and another bubble with what seems to be what land walkers call a wolf cue the entrance of father who instantly takes the bubbles away from brother who then starts crying. All while this is going on mother is currently rushing around trying to figure out what to do,and my older brother is floating around the house. I swim over to the young one who's name is Locky and softly ask him "why did you take the land creatures?" He wailed "I just wanted them to play with me!"  I smile at the small siren swimming over to hug him. Thats when father comes over and starts reprimanding Locky saying "you should know better than to take land creatures they can't survive down here with us, Salinea would you take them back up please?" I nod and take the bubbled land walkers from father "I'll be back soon!" I say to all the family as I swim out the door.

Swimming across the ocean with two land animals is a strange sight to see for any underwater person however there are some advantages to the strange looks you get, mainly laughing at how their faces scrunch up while trying to figure out whats going on. After seeing the beach and surfacing I figure here would be the best place to pop the bubbles so I do letting the wolf doggy paddle back to shore where some other wolves seem to be waiting the bird however kinda just splashes around until I pick it up and toss it into the air where it flies off.
I sigh figuring it has been a while since anyone has gone hunting so I start looking for an acceptable ship to feed the village apon finding one with loud and rude humans, I start to sing my voice carries across the waves to the crew they all fall into a trance and follow me deeper into the sea in their ship when they are close enough to the village I have them dive into the water so they will be pulled under by the people my village of sirens.

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Okay so how was this for a first chapter? Let me know what you think, I hope you enjoyed it