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check out this thing i wrote.... its just an idea... should i make it a story?? thx!!
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k here it is...
CHAPTER ONE
I was reading my new magazine while at work. In this particular mall, the Hollister store is in the back, kind of hidden. I don’t get much customers.
“OW! What was that for??” a deep, unfamiliar voice yelled.
“I told you, if you were going to drag me in here you would pay.” An Irish accent spoke. Not important. Just some more immature teens, I suppose. Back to reading.
“Well, I’m sorry I wanted to see the gir-“
“Ya know she is right there?”
I looked up at the two boys. Are they talking about me??? Their faces hid behind sunglasses and hoodies. The boy in the blue hoodie had pieces of blond hair sticking to his forehead. Most likely sweating under that hood, it is in the middle of summer. The other boy wasn’t wearing a hood, just a light jacket, sunglasses, and a beanie.
“Hi there!” The blond haired boy said.
“H-hi.” I replied blushing. I don’t think a boy, let alone TWO boys have ever came up to me like this.
“I’m Niall and this is-“
“Harry. Harry Styles. And you are?”
The blond, Niall, shot Harry a dirty look. Haha I like these boys. Wait… are… are these boys who I think they are???
“I’m Eleanor… Calder.” I replied.
“Eleanor?” Louis asked me, sounding worried.
“W-What?” I asked confusingly.
“I don’t know, you were day dreaming again.”
I looked over at Louis, with his sweet smile showing off his perfect teeth and his perfect hair with its perfect quiff… He’s just so perfect.
“Sorry Lou Bear. So, what do you want to do today?”
Louis looked around my flat for a minute and then back at me.
“Let’s get a group together and we can… oh! Let’s go to the mall! Can we El, please??” He gave me his puppy dog face and folded his hands up to his chin.
“Sure, call up the boys.” I can never resist that face…
“YAY!” Louis kissed my cheek and went into the other room to call up the boys.
Well, nothing better to do then check twitter I suppose. I opened the app and tweeted:
‘Spending the day with my Lou Bear J xx’
Almost immediately I had hundreds of replies.
‘@Larry4eva: I hope you mean HARRY and LOUIS are spending today together’
Ouch.
“Bad news El…” Louis said standing in the door way. “Zayn and Liam are with the girls, so it’s just going to be me, you, Niall and Harry. But Niall said he’s only coming if we go somewhere to eat afterword.”
Louis’ face filled with sadness, so I came over to give him a kiss. “Why so sad??” I asked.
“It’s just… I’m afraid that the paps will see me and Harry together and think… Well what I’m trying to say is… El, I see the tweets you get on Twitter. I don’t like them.” Louis looked down at his feet. Then back at me. “I love you Eleanor. Please don’t ever leave me.”
What?!?! What is he talking about?! I would NEVER leave him!
“Louis, I love you no matter what those people say!” I reassured him.
He looked me in the eyes and wrapped his arms around me. We stared at each other for a minute until he leaned in for a kiss.
“Okay Lou, let’s go get ready.” I smiled at him and he let me go. Just as I was about to leave, he pulled me back into his arms, so I wasn’t facing him.
“Or, we could cancel and just stay like this forever…” he said.
“As much as I want too, we can’t. You already told Niall we were going out to eat.”
Louis sighed and let go of me. “Alright, alright. I’ll shower first.” He dragged himself into the bathroom and shut the door. I stood where I was until I heard the water start.
What now?
I sat on the couch and turned on the television. Oh, what’s the use? Nothing good’s ever on Sunday mornings anyway. I turned the TV back off and laid down on my side. Pretty soon I was off to sleep.
“Hi guys, I would like you to meet Eleanor.” Harry said as we walked into his flat. Three other boys sat on the couch, watching… is that Toy Story?
“LIIIIAAAMMM!” A dark haired boy groaned. That must be Zayn.
“What? I like this movie.” Liam replied.
“Guys, guys, let’s not be too immature in front of the pretty girl.” Harry said to them. I blushed as Harry put his arm around me. “C’mon love, make yourself comfortable.” He said motioning towards the second couch.
Niall looked at us, shook his head, and went down the hall, which I assume meant his room.
Harry looked at me confusingly. I shrugged my shoulders and sat on the couch. Harry sat next to me and held my hand.
“Wait… so are you two together?” the last boy, Louis, asked. I looked down at my feet because I didn’t want them to see how red I was.
Harry took his arm away from mine. “Er... Um… I uh, I don’t know… El?”
I looked up at Harry and bit my lip. “I suppose so.”
Louis shook me awake. “El, sweetheart, get up.” He said.
“Sorry, I must have dozed off.” I sat up and stretched my arms. I noticed Louis staring at me. “What?”
Louis looked away and walked out of the room. Strange much?
I grabbed all my things and went off to take a shower. Today is going to be a loooong day…
CHAPTER TWO
Louis has been acting strange ever since I woke up. Did I do something wrong?? He won’t even look at me.
We got in the car and started to make our way to the mall.
“Louis… are you okay?” I asked him.
Louis looked at me then back at the road. “Yeah.” he said plainly. Well, at least I tried.
okay guys that's all i have for now... like it? hate it? any comments? thxxx <3
