Okay, so these are my biggest pet peeves about when someone writes a fanfiction. Yup. so here i go
1:
when someone writes in all abbreviations. example: k so i luv 2 go 2 the beach so much. lol.
see? isn't that annoying?
2:
when people say i looked into his brown orbs. like who says that? honestly. would you ever go up to someone and say hey your orbs are beautiful. no. nobody does that. if someone walked up to me and said that i would probably most likely punch them in the neck.
3:
when someone says my car purred to life. 1.your car isnt a cat. 2.your car is not alive in any way so why say it.
4:
when the character brags about how pretty they think they are. for example, once i was reading a fanfic and you know how on tumblr there are these so called 'tumblr girls' because they're a model or something for the website? yes? no? ok anyway the girl would look in the mirror and go im so ugly. wait who am i kidding. im beautiful. ha beautiful, im a tumblr girl even thouh i just joined yesterday. like who do you think you are?
5:
when the story just keeps running on and on and on and never ends and no punctuation or proper grammar and never ever ever ever ever ever ever get to the point.
6:
when the end of a story just ends and its not even a good ending. like if your story is good, i expect you to write a really good ending.
7:
when someone says 'the end' at the end of the story. like no duh. i thought it was the beginning.
8:
when the authors note takes up more than half of the chapter and there are only like 3 paragraphs left. like you have got to be kidding me.
9:
when the character does drugs. if you do drugs thats great but i really dont care if your character does drugs. unless its some story about drugs, i dont want to read about it.
10:
when the 'school slut's' name is always kiara or kailee. And since when is there always a school slut? is there one in your school? hm? no? exactly.
Okay thats all for now but ill probably update when i get a chance.
