For Mr. Bell, Greatest school teacher I ever had,
I looked around as I limped across the thick mud, that threatened to swallow me into it. I could make out the silhouette of a monumental mansion, sitting lonely in the middle of the field. I walked towards the antique building as the fog gently touched my face. Now , I can see it clearly, a building with smashed windows and rotting wood walls, that made it look like it had been there for a 100 years. I touched the antique door handle. Suddenly, I heard a crack under my feet, and then...
I landed head-first on the dusty floor. I felt like I had broken every bone in my body. I sat up in a feeling of confusion. After I had regained my sight, I looked around. I asked myself,"What is this place?" It looked like I was in an underground basement. It was as silent as death. The room, which proved that it's ancient had hundreds of various designed doors. I was thinking if I should stay here and starve to death, or open a door and reveal it's ancient secrets.
I just realised that each door had a number above them, ranging from 0 - 10. I was suspicious of what was behind the doors. First, I opened door 5, because it was my favorite number. I braced myself to what was going to be inside. I opened the door, slowly and gingerly. *creaaak*. The door was now wide open, and all I could see inside was... Nothing. I was terrified. I could be stuck here forever with no way out. I started opening every single door, hoping to find one that is not blocked by the monstrous wall. I came to the last door, every single door had a wall behind it. This worn-out wood door was my last hope. I opened the door... and found a dimly lit corridor behind. I couldn't believe my eyes. I ran, to what I think was 100 km/h, and found staircases leading upwards...
I sprinted through the muddy filed, the mud, which was still trying to devour me, was slowing me down. Suddenly, out of the blue, thick fog encased me, like a snake swallowing a mouse. "It's too late to save your family now." Came an eerie voice from, who knows! I was scared, no I was petrified. I ran, as fast as my legs can carry me. When my house was in view, I relaxed a little. I swung the door wide open, and what I saw in there, chased the life out of me...
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The Last Murderer - A Mystery/Thriller...
Mystery / ThrillerSee how Tor got into all of this bloody mess, just for not obeying his parents. Could he save his parents and friends, or be lonely and stuck forever in the field? Read to find out! Made in 25/6/16 -Ihsan