the visum of me

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So there I was on the top of Mount Goede.It was a nice sunny day, the sun was just busting through the clouds.The Fangers were chirping as if they were being attacked by a Gretter.A Gretter is a great wild beast in charge of all creature habitats.I watched the Fangers as they swooped down and caught their prey, the Woolly Ant.But one Fanger caught my eye as it was being zapped by some dark creature.I then wanted to go check it out.So...I hopped on my horse and skedaddled away.It was a human with some type of hand held device to do this labor of electricity.Well right at that moment I noticed nobody on this planetos had that strange futuristic device.So i hopped away on my beautiful horse.Her name is Chonce.

At the city of Emperol i stood before the righteous, almighty, and true king.The king had always looked so much like I had seen him before.I then explained to him "Oh almighty one as we have arrived to this planetos sixteen days ago nothing has changed.But now something very strange has intersected with my eyesight.A very thin man with a dark robe and a white beard has been in the dark woods!He was using some kind of device that was futuristic, he used it to kill the creatures.It had a zap of lightning when he used it."He looked at me with a glare."I don't believe this nonsense!" The king said as his red and white jacket shook."Get out before I have to kick your tush out!"I stood and waited for something to happen but as I had learned in these sixteen days the "New king" was I DON'T CARE IF IT'S TRUE OR NOT I DON'T BELIEVE YOU!The next second i was rubbing on my butt and walking to my home.

I had three sisters and two brothers but as i am about to tell you i only see my sisters once each year.My sisters names were Belle, age 17, Seige, age 7, and Patricia, age 14.Now my brothers strangely all had Earthly names.Noah, age 18, and Jake, age 19.My name is Fcrahe, age 20.

The reason i only saw my sisters once a year was because:

5 years ago a huge war broke out from us Americans and the Italians.The reason for this was Rome thought that they should still be the leaders of the Planetos still.So they separated into 16 groups and went to different places of the world.When they arrived at America we were building things to go to different planets and visums.So when the Italians came to enslave us we gathered everyone except the women and girls and we started for the visum.So every year i stay down at Earth for 1-2 months and just hang out and visit.Us men ended up in a visum (universe) named "Me".Now Jake was so excited to leave Earth but Noah and I wanted to stay.For some reason they elected Krory Rage as king.I sided with my brothers with another dude named David Sheeloh. He is with the Christian faith which I believe in too.He says exactly what I like to hear on the Television.

My dad's name is Nolan.My mothers name is Kerry.My mom thinks that we're "lucky" to be on The planetos L-Lima Dinja.

Our planetos is 75 degrees warmer than it is on Earth.We have canyons everywhere and mountains.The largest of all is Mount Goede.I was watching the Televison and on the news a guy jumped off the fourth peak of a mountain named Mount FoCloo the smallest mountain on L-Lima Dinja.But it is still 2 times the size of Mount Everest back on Earth.When he landed his feet blew 20 feet in the air.Blood was everywhere!Just picture a zombie missing his legs and his eyes are rolled backwards.It was crazy!I would rather get a soar suit and soar down to the bottom.I always go to the rest of Mount Goede.The rest is a flat shady area with a large pond and some trees, usually Nooj trees.Nooj trees are big slimy trees with cuts all over them.

Our visum we found has 4 planetos' in the solar system. Fortunately they all have oxygen so we can travel and be safe.We have a very strange "mean star"(the sun on Earth).It is right in the center of the planets.The planets don't slide horizontally they slide vertically.Our moon is huge and almost pefectly round.It isn't called "moon" it is called "Shallalon".

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 25, 2013 ⏰

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