( crunch ) " Hello?" Called Stiener as he walked through Carol's house. "Carol please come out."
"Here," replied Carol.
" Oh, thank goodness your okay," said Stiener with a sigh of relief, " Carol, I'm pulling you from the case." "It's for your own good, your a new detective and this case is a little much for you," said Stiener with much grief.
" I know what you mean and I understand why you are doing this," said Carol as she bowed her head towards the floor. " "Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha," muttered Carol.
" Carol are you okay?" asked Stiener.
"Ha ha ha ha, never better," laughed Carol, " may death do you part from this world."
"What did you say Carol?" Asked Stiener.
" May death do you part from this world," muttered Carol from her mouth as she slowly raised her head. " All I ever wanted was for these people to be from this forsaken world and now you have will be too. Carol reached for her gun, but Stiener stopped her and handcuffed her. Carol resisted and ended up hitting her head on the wall and knocked herself out cold.
" Ugh, whe.....where am I," asked Carol as she rubbed her head.
"The hospital Carol, or should I say TICKLER," said Stiener with a fierce voice. ( SLAM!) A big stack of pictures on the table next to Carol. "We found these in your attic along with three bodies with an L, E, and a R carved into their foreheads.
" It wasn't me I promise," pleaded Carol, " you must trust me Stiener."
"We also found this," exclaimed Stiener as he slammed a knife ( with blood stained on it) on the table. Carol again pleaded not to be guilty but no one believed her. Carol took a long look at the knife and then bowed her head.
" Ha ha ha ha ha," muttered Carol as she lifted her head " I will cleanse this world of every impure mortal in this world, ha ha ha ha." Carol got up and took the gun from Stiener and pointed at him. She then pointed the gun at herself and said, " May this world and the next remember my face for I will be in their nightmares now and forever." And she pulled the trigger ( BOOM ).
The End
# major plot twist ## cliff hanger
