Sometimes people have really good story lines but I can't eff-ing read it because it looks like:
Sooo Maria and I walked back to the lockers and Frank was there??? WTH???
"Why are you here." i said
"Cuz i love my cat and you forgot to give her back" he said
OMG, I totally forgot!!! "Ok i will soon."
"Hey." kenny Said "but nooo shes my cat!!!???"
WUT!!!1!Okay, so I have actually seen this, and it annoys me. A) Don't add extra O's at the end of "So" or "no". B) One question/exclamation mark does the job. You don't need three. C) Don't put question marks after sentences that should have a period and vice versa. D) Who actually writes/speaks in acronyms? E) Capitalize when you actually need to, like with "I" or proper nouns. F) Make sure your antecedent is clear. If you're old enough to write "mature" stories, you should know how to spell.
So, please, review your story. It can have a great plot and I might not be able to read it.
ESTÁS LEYENDO
Clichés In Wattpad Stories
РазноеThings that annoy me within Wattpad books. Disclaimer: This isn't targetting one particular piece. I may be guilty as well by accident.