DO NOT OWN D GRAY MAN AND NEVER WILL! well lets get on with the story!
3 person pov
a girl walks alone on a snow covered road. her long silver hair flying behind her, her light blue eyes looking dead as if nothing can ever make her happy again. the girl wears a black jacket and gray pants she looks around the age of 5 or so. as she walks tears start to stream down her small pale face. she stumbles but keeps her balance her legs shake but she keeps walking. the buildings around her are tall and dark contrasting greatly with the pure white snow.
the town is abandoned. no one left only the corpses hidden in the shadows. as the girl walks she wonders "why her?" "why was she the only one left?""why did they have to die?""why?"
the girl stumbles once again but this time falls to the ground. the ground is hard even with the snow over it. she does not get back up. she sits up and crys. theres nothing left for her. as she cries a man walks up to her.
"are you lost little girl?" he asks in a creepy voice
the girl does not react at first but she starts to mumble to herself."no no no. not another one. i cant. no i cant no more"
she breaks down in to a new round of tears the man above her starts to change. he turns into a huge monster like thing with large creepy guns and a weird looking humanish face on the top of its head. the monster aims the guns at the young girl.
the girl suddenly looks up her eyes glowing bright blue all traces of tears gone in the sky the stars shift. the monster in front of her is turned to dust. all that is left is the katana that the girl had used to kill the beast. it glowed a faint blue and was attached to her hand by the bone. her eyes return to their normal color and she collapses to the ground, the bone katana retreating in to her hand.
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so? what do you think? should i continue this story? let me know in the comment!
yes i am open to criticism but not the mean kind just like suggestions. if you have a idea for future chapys then tell me please!
the pic on the side is her all grown up! well not really shes a teen in the pic. my oun oc! but not my art.http://flamelover1.deviantart.com/art/human-stargazer-385204421
